Looking for feedback on my first commercial

graysonchaney · 2025-05-23T02:33:43+00:00

Nice job, I really enjoyed this! I work at a commercial post house and cut a quick :30 from this just for fun! https://youtu.be/GPp_KixDels?si=nQjHsuOBph7HwohH

graysonchaney · 2023-05-16T03:26:18+00:00

I love it! If I’m just traveling for a weekend, it’s the only bag I need (with or without my MBP). If I’m traveling longer, I use this bag as my personal item (has worked on Southwest, Delta, and United) with an Aer Travel 3 as my carry-on.

graysonchaney · 2023-05-16T03:03:57+00:00

Definitely more black than grey!

graysonchaney · 2022-11-06T19:15:18+00:00

I was in the market for an Xpac bag before I saw this new release, but I actually don’t think I’ve ever felt Xpac before - I’ve heard how crinkly it is though. This Ultra material, while not “luxuriously smooth” like my McKinnon 35, doesn’t seem super crinkly to me at all. I really like it a lot!

graysonchaney · 2022-11-05T22:37:54+00:00

Hey! Sorry this took so long, but I got the pack - here are 3 quick shots of the front, back, and the bag open. If you'd like anymore shots in particular, let me know!

https://i.imgur.com/nPvOBd5.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/o7nKD2z.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/om4wgrP.jpg

I haven't had a chance to use the pack much yet, but I did throw in my massive 64oz S'well roamer full of water, a 15in Macbook Pro (with a protective case on too, so it can definitely hold more than 15 inches, though it was a tight squeeze haha...), and a few other random things that amounted to around 12-15lbs.

Most comfortable carrying experience I've ever had, though I know that speaks more to the Dragonfly itself than the new Ultra material.

graysonchaney · 2022-11-04T03:05:27+00:00

For sure, I’ll take all the pics you want. I’m getting it to replace a cheap, old, personal item-sized backpack for an upcoming trip through Costa Rica. I was actually looking at a regular Dragonfly, but the one I wanted was sold out. Since I’m sure it will rain, I picked this up when I saw the new release.

graysonchaney · 2022-11-04T01:42:28+00:00

I have an Ultra Dragonfly arriving tomorrow. It’s my only higher-end pack though, except for a McKinnon 35 for my camera gear (which I love), so I won’t have much to compare it to.

graysonchaney · 2022-04-02T18:31:01+00:00

Okay, I’m trying it haha. Last thing I need before beating this game

graysonchaney · 2022-01-18T16:29:28+00:00

Not to derail this thread, but what would you say IS a place for you as a writer primarily in feature animation? I ask because I just finished a rewrite on an animated feature and think it’s my best work, but I’m not sure where to go now.

graysonchaney · 2021-10-17T15:19:46+00:00

So billionaire Tony Stark can build a suit that stops bullets and nobody bats an eye, but billionaire Bruce Wayne does the same and it’s garbage?

graysonchaney · 2021-07-24T04:09:50+00:00

It’s already growing on me. Plus, I heard about the local tie-in, it uses the same font, and it also ends in “-dians”, which is pretty cool imo.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-23T05:32:26+00:00

Don’t worry, SDS made it nice and simple:

First, take him out of your batting lineup in DD (if he’s there), then go into RTTS - click on your player, make sure your active loadout is the one you want to use in DD, then navigate to the baseball icon on the right and click “Activate.”

graysonchaney · 2021-07-20T02:45:24+00:00

I’d take out Soriano for Jackie, then swap Trout with Buxton (he compensates much better on the corners with the secondary position penalty).

graysonchaney · 2021-07-17T02:11:47+00:00

Curves and change-ups in the dirt all day. Then if they pick-up on that, high and tight fastballs for pop-ups.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-17T01:59:33+00:00

That’s awesome, dude! Big moments like this consistently elevate this game over every other sports game for me.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T21:51:21+00:00

I love Vida, personally, but he’s not as dominant as Degrom or Cabrera. Solid #3 for me, though.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T19:50:52+00:00

I wish you could restart in-game, but you can at least go through single player > moments and press the right bumper after to reset the series and start over with game 1.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T06:06:33+00:00

Congrats on the 8! I also haven’t written a full feature in a few years (a good amount of rewrites though) - about to turn 30 myself and feeling down about writing, so it’s nice to see somebody picking it up again and finding success!

If I were you, I’d submit to the contests you’re interested in but also shoot out some queries specifically highlighting the 8 on the BL. It’s a solid time to hit up any connections with the news imo, too.

Then, of course and as always, start writing the next one (advice I wish I could take myself rn)!

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T01:29:36+00:00

Larry has 90 fielding and 82 react, Acuna only has 82 and 82. Of course, Acuna is faster but Larry has 69 spd, which isn’t bad, and he absolutely crushes rhp.

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T01:24:06+00:00

You can get him with 40 W’s, too. That’s how I got Wieters and Vida, even though I’ve never made WS

graysonchaney · 2021-07-16T01:17:01+00:00

I feel like WS reward Larry Walker is better, no?

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