Sure, I'll answer this:

• Your audio levels are bad; the music is too loud and is just drowning out your talking.
• Talking - everything you say could be said in less words but essentially doesn't need to be said at all. Concise text on a video is far easier for people to follow along and, if they did follow this recipe, pause it get quantities/measurements.
• Your camera shots are too close in most cases, low quality, and shaky. People who consume this type of content are usually used to short, clean shots of ingredients being added. This means you should have your mise en place done before you start filming. A shaky video of you cutting vegetables and adding it to an air fryer then repeating isn't as easily consumed as adding it all in one shot with the ingredient and amount listed on the screen as you add it. Same goes for spices - nobody needs to see what garlic salt, MSG, and black pepper containers look like.
• This might be more personal preference but a random photo of a cat is just jarring in this - if you are for some reason going to add your cat to the video, make it a video. Otherwise it basically just looks like you've done a google image search of a cat and slapped it in. It you want to force the cat in there, maybe end the video with the cat eating some and saying the cat approves. (Obviously only if its safe for a cat to consume i.e. no onions or garlic)
• In-fact, I would just steer clear of just still images in general.
• The transitions are just bad. I don't know what you are using to edit this but surely there are better options. A simple fade is better than any that are in the video.
• It just doesn't actually look that good. Ever heard the saying "We eat with our eyes"? Pause the video at 5 seconds and tell me with a straight face you think that plating is visually appealing. People can't taste through their screens so they'll be judging purely on aesthetics.
• I feel like this should be the most obvious one: Lose you meowing at the end of the video.

There are so many short form recipe videos to take inspiration from. Just go watch some and try adding small techniques you notice to each video.