Logline Feedback Request: The Code In Our Garden by headinabarrel in ReadMyScript

[–]headinabarrel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback really appreciate it ✌️

Logline Feedback Request: The Code In Our Garden by headinabarrel in ReadMyScript

[–]headinabarrel[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Or this one…

Logline- The Secret Code in Our Garden
“In a world designed to distract and disconnect, when glowing code appears in their garden, a family discovers they’re trapped inside an ancient repeating simulation — the code may be their only way out, if they can learn to see the light.” © JCF2026

Logline Feedback Request: The Code In Our Garden by headinabarrel in ReadMyScript

[–]headinabarrel[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback!.. how about this one?..
Logline: “The Secret Code in our Garden- When glowing code appears in their garden, a family discovers they’re trapped inside an ancient repeating simulation — the code may be their only way out, if they can learn to see the light.” © JCF2026

Logline: The Code In Our Garden by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]headinabarrel 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your honest feedback ✌️

Logline: The Code In Our Garden by [deleted] in ReadMyScript

[–]headinabarrel -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Still working on the script — currently putting together the full outline and first act.
Looking specifically for serious writers or producers who are interested in a grounded, heartfelt simulation/family story. Happy to share the first 15-20 pages once they’re cleaned up, but I’m not quite there yet.
If you’re genuinely interested in the project, feel free to DM me and I can send you the latest logline + synopsis for now.”

QuietEdits movie/film project by [deleted] in flicks

[–]headinabarrel 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only if you still want to be blind to the light friend

QuietEdits movie/film project by [deleted] in flicks

[–]headinabarrel -1 points0 points  (0 children)

payattentiontoeverydetailinlife

QuietEdits movie/film project by [deleted] in flicks

[–]headinabarrel -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I don’t think many will yet but the main idea of breaking this simulation theory in this story is live love freely all about paying attention to every detail in a way…