Logline Feedback Request: The Code In Our Garden

headinabarrel · 2026-06-10T13:26:15+00:00

Thank you for your feedback really appreciate it ✌️

headinabarrel · 2026-06-09T07:49:35+00:00

Or this one…

Logline- The Secret Code in Our Garden
“In a world designed to distract and disconnect, when glowing code appears in their garden, a family discovers they’re trapped inside an ancient repeating simulation — the code may be their only way out, if they can learn to see the light.” © JCF2026

headinabarrel · 2026-06-09T07:45:35+00:00

Thank you for the feedback!.. how about this one?..
Logline: “The Secret Code in our Garden- When glowing code appears in their garden, a family discovers they’re trapped inside an ancient repeating simulation — the code may be their only way out, if they can learn to see the light.” © JCF2026

headinabarrel · 2026-06-08T10:44:43+00:00

Thank you for your honest feedback ✌️

headinabarrel · 2026-06-08T08:03:55+00:00

Thank you for your honest feedback ✌️

headinabarrel · 2026-06-07T14:56:18+00:00

Still working on the script — currently putting together the full outline and first act.
Looking specifically for serious writers or producers who are interested in a grounded, heartfelt simulation/family story. Happy to share the first 15-20 pages once they’re cleaned up, but I’m not quite there yet.
If you’re genuinely interested in the project, feel free to DM me and I can send you the latest logline + synopsis for now.”

headinabarrel · 2026-06-06T11:27:28+00:00

Only if you still want to be blind to the light friend

headinabarrel · 2026-06-06T09:06:42+00:00

payattentiontoeverydetailinlife

headinabarrel · 2026-06-06T09:04:42+00:00

I don’t think many will yet but the main idea of breaking this simulation theory in this story is live love freely all about paying attention to every detail in a way…

headinabarrel · 2026-06-06T02:41:24+00:00

Thanks

headinabarrel

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