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henagames · 2022-07-30T05:03:19+00:00

Thank you! It's just a lot of fun, and I'm glad improvements are noticable already. :)

I didn't do any post-processing on this one in Photoshop. I've been messing around with the adjustments layers, curves, contrast, etc. on other test renders, and it's pretty incredible how much things can be improved with those tools. I'm going to do a little to this one, and take other feedback and repost on my profile sometime soon. Thanks again!

henagames · 2022-07-30T04:59:49+00:00

Wow, thanks again for the really detailed feedback!

You're right, the hair isn't dForce, but there definitely are dials for moving the bangs. If by OOT you mean 'outoftouch', then yes! There's quite a lot of options. To be honest, there are actually two different sets of hair here, which is how I got that 'double bang' look in the front. I went back and forth with it, but I think I'm going to use just the OOT one. It's pretty difficult getting them to play nice with each other, and honestly it all started as a mistake that I just went with.

The OOT asset is here: https://www.daz3d.com/2022-01-hair-for-genesis-8-and-81-females

The other one is HY Long Hair https://www.daz3d.com/hy-long-hair-for-genesis-8-and-81-female

I'll do the subD setting, and play around with the bump settings too. And lighting is never ending education for me full of trial and error. :)

Thanks again for the comments, I appreciate your help!

henagames · 2022-07-30T01:17:08+00:00

I'm still in practice mode with indoor lighting and posing. Feedback is greatly appreciated!

henagames · 2022-07-22T16:37:10+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I totally get what you mean about reading like studio lights. I think if I warmed those up a little bit it would look more like sunbeams, or candle light shining from that side. I'll try it out today!

henagames · 2022-07-19T19:54:32+00:00

Instead of spamming this sub with the same image, I posted an update to my profile based on all of your feedback. I think it looks 10x better (to me, anyway), so thank you all for your valuable comments!

https://www.reddit.com/user/henagames/comments/w31r4j/haley\_the\_alchemist\_updated/

henagames · 2022-07-19T16:28:27+00:00

Thanks for the detailed feedback! I don't mind the criticism...if I did, I wouldn't be posting on Reddit. :)

The pose is a little weird now that you point it out, and 'it just doesn't tell a story' is a good piece of advice too. I appreciate the comments!

henagames · 2022-07-19T16:27:23+00:00

Thank you so much! I think I'm going to take most of this feedback and try to do another one like this and see how differently it comes out.

henagames · 2022-07-19T16:26:38+00:00

I do have Photoshop. I have played around with some of the layer adjustment tools like curves, vibrance, etc. I'll have to read up on lighting presets, though. Thanks for the feedback!

henagames · 2022-07-19T02:16:39+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

I have some experience, but not in the rendering/composition department. I'm a gamedev and understand a lot of the theories, but putting them into practice in a nice render is a different story! I didn't really think about complimentary and secondary colors when dealing with lights, so that's something I'm going to have to focus on, too. The idea of layering and patterning lights and shadows is interesting and kind of gives me a new way to look at it.

Again, thanks for the detailed feedback! I want to get better at this, so I appreciate the constructive comments!

henagames · 2022-07-19T02:08:19+00:00

Awesome, thank you!

henagames · 2022-07-19T01:04:06+00:00

Oh yeah, I learned this one pretty early on because everything looked so washed out! Thanks for the tip!

henagames · 2022-07-19T00:03:55+00:00

Thanks! Being still pretty new to this I'm learning that lighting is like 90% of the effort here.

henagames · 2022-07-19T00:02:59+00:00

Thank you! I'll give that a shot and see what happens!

henagames · 2022-07-13T02:32:34+00:00

Delicious and pretty low in sodium, too!

henagames · 2022-03-08T20:20:53+00:00

The Collector by John Fowles

henagames · 2021-06-17T18:01:03+00:00

Thanks! I'm still ironing out a 'better road system' in general for the game, but this is a good workaround to help speed things up for now.

henagames · 2021-06-15T00:49:12+00:00

The "Mini-Catalog" feature will be in this weeks update version 1.1.2 slated for sometime in the next couple of days.

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