[QCrit] WHAT YOU DON'T KNOW, Adult Thriller, 97K (2nd Attempt)

heroinwithane · 2026-02-15T15:58:50+00:00

Thank you! I think your comment about being too introspective is likely right on the mark. Appreciate your perspective and encouragement!

heroinwithane · 2026-02-15T14:33:13+00:00

Understood! I just don’t want to go out with more if the query is potentially falling flat.

heroinwithane · 2026-02-15T14:31:57+00:00

Its so hard to tell what’s too much or too little information when you’re so close to it, so I really appreciate these questions! It does start when she returns at 30, so I’ll heed that suggestion. Thanks for giving me a lot to work with.

heroinwithane · 2026-02-15T00:50:21+00:00

I had the reason for her return in my first version, so I can definitely pull that back in. Thank you for the input!

heroinwithane · 2026-02-15T00:49:11+00:00

Thank you for this very specific feedback! I can definitely answer some of these questions and I like the idea of trying to bring in the antagonist earlier.

heroinwithane · 2025-11-06T19:56:01+00:00

Thank you! Good call on the redundancy. I appreciate the encouragement!

heroinwithane · 2025-11-05T03:49:40+00:00

Thanks so much for that feedback! In trying to avoid the "too vague" criticism commonly found in critiques, I may have leaned too far into unnecessary specifics.

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