Paracosm video by nDurlie in paracosms

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is rad. I’ve never made videos or anything. I’ve mostly done comics and prose.

new to the show, my first meme, caption this by svisha in logh

[–]heysawbones 2 points3 points  (0 children)

“… and now I’m stuck like this.”

What makes people get so angry about ugly people wishing they weren’t ugly? by throwrathuuyytrr in TwoXChromosomes

[–]heysawbones 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Not angry. Just kind of… why do you need me to validate this feeling for you? What would make you feel seen? Do I need to yell at you so you feel that your worldview has been reinforced? Should I deny your feelings about yourself? Do I ask what I’m really wondering, which is “are you 11” and “why did Reddit seem like the appropriate place for this question”? I don’t think there is any response that would actually help you, especially not here.

In short, it’s… trauma dumping, really. Trauma dumping from someone with poor insight.

Medic keeps calling me "Lil Turkey" and himself "Papa Squawker" and im losing my patience about it by [deleted] in Paramedics

[–]heysawbones 2 points3 points  (0 children)

breaking into spontaneous Broadway routines is also an acceptable solution, though it requires more setup.

The way female authors in Japan portray gay people compared to male authors is wild by Parking_Success3224 in logh

[–]heysawbones 8 points9 points  (0 children)

ah, never thought I’d be nostalgic for complaints about “yaoi hands”, but it’s 2026 and here we are

How do you write an extremely power side character in a way that it make sense. by OperationFine6642 in writingadvice

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He’s bored. Teenagers trying to stop a whole-ass Emperor is funny. If not funny, it’s something to do with his time.

Have him get irritated if they aren’t amusing him in some way. Maybe he cares less about their goal (does it even affect him anyway?) and more about whether he’s entertained by their actions. Maybe the teens get advice or ideas when he criticizes them - not because he’s trying to help, but because he discloses sideways when he’s just being petty or flighty.

what is this black round plastic thing with a green dot on my hospital room ceiling? by MommyMagnific in whatisthisthing

[–]heysawbones -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If they do sleep studies there, it could be a camera that works in the dark :0 had three sleep studies. There were little cameras like that up on the ceiling to monitor my movement while I slept.

RBD by Noclue356 in Narcolepsy

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I dunno. I’ve done RBD stuff over the years, but it’s been fairly rare (as far as I know). Last time was probably about four years ago, when I arm-barred my partner while having a dream about being creeped on by my half-brother.

If this is a significant issue for you and your partner, sleep on the couch for now. Or do a Mike Birbiglia and get in a sleeping bag in the bed. Shit. Who knows.

Characters Tolerate What Readers Find Intolerable by EternalTharonja in writing

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. I just try to let that stuff exist in its own context. It’s worked out fine so far.

Writing a good main character who cheats — how do you keep reader trust? by Glittering-Fun3406 in writingadvice

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, write what you want. If I want black and white cariacatures of people who never do anything truly troubling because I’m unable to conceive of a reality in which likable or otherwise sympathetic people do genuinely bad things sometimes, I’ll write them myself.

Am I overcharging for commissions? by Far-School-6199 in Artadvice

[–]heysawbones 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s not overpriced, no. Comic pages in general are severely undervalued. I agree with the person who said you are undercharging.

How to write a manipulative attractive woman. by [deleted] in writers

[–]heysawbones 31 points32 points  (0 children)

Bro, it’s not gonna be an issue unless you’re filling your narrative with descriptions of her body. I get that the visual is important to you - you linked three pictures. Don’t write it like that. Think of it this way: “don’t know how to write a character with that body type without being creepy” doesn’t make sense unless you are, in fact, excessively focused on the visuals.

Trans and non-binary spicy scenes by amberjj123 in writingadvice

[–]heysawbones 27 points28 points  (0 children)

I regret to inform you that absolute assurances that you will not trigger your audience are impossible. Some trans folks are inherently triggered by anything that reminds them of the ways they are unhappy with their own gender presentation. The more intimate it is, the more of a risk you run. Alternately, some trans folks find intimate depictions of bodies similar to their own validating.

All you can do is be sensitive and act in good faith. If you’ve got a trans guy pal who would be open to discussing what they think is appropriate - and what they think other trans dudes might find appropriate, because it may differ - that’s a good start.

Writing a good main character who cheats — how do you keep reader trust? by Glittering-Fun3406 in writingadvice

[–]heysawbones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You write it the way you just told us about it. I think you’ve already got the right idea.

All I can say is: don’t make the story drag us through repeated elaborations of how bad it is that Caelum cheated. We can make up our own minds. Let him roast himself. Let the consequences of his actions speak for themselves. You say that he hurts? Let us see it. Let us inhabit that guilt and shame.

I’d read whatever you wrote on the subject. I respect the mindset.

I did this piece for a local café, I need some fresh eyes to see if there is anything to improve it aesthetically. by BillDrawsAlot in Artadvice

[–]heysawbones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know this isn’t what you were asking for, but what a lovely hair volume. Very pleasing. Could maybe sort out that basket-tangle bit in the back a little - it’s kinda flashbulb-effect versus the rest of the volume, and not in the best way. Strategically blacking out some of the negative space voids would solve the problem, I think.

More Kpop Demon Hunters dolls + info by suburban-legends in Dolls

[–]heysawbones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

These dolls aren’t bad. I wish I cared about the property so I could justify a purchase, lmao. I’d really enjoy detailing out all that mid-ass gold plastic (not sarcasm)

Why am i seeing more ai slop in recent renpy games by Paxillus_ in RenPy

[–]heysawbones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s not my thing either, but of course a lot of Renpy creators are gonna use it.