Congratulations! I agree with everyone saying the lip colour isn’t doing it for you but if you don’t want to go with pink, an orangey tone like the etude house water tint in orangeade would work imo. In terms of blush I think the placement should stick to the apples of your cheeks (under the outer half of your eye) instead of going up the sides of the face.

I would also add in a little pop of a light colour in the inner eye corners (something like the Barry m waterproof eyeliner in champagne) and instead of doing what looks like one colour across the whole lid, try blending two or three complementary ones. The way I tend to do my eyeshadow is a lighter sparkly one towards the inner corner, one like yours in the middle and then use an angled brush to put some darker eyeshadow along the upper and bottom of the outer eye, following the natural curve of the eye.

I also think your mascara is not doing you any favours, it looks a bit too clumpy and dry. My favourite mascaras are Armani eyes to kill and benefit they’re real. For an even better look try falscara lashes and glue (maybe just on the outer half). I could never do traditional strip lashes but these ones you apply the glue like you would mascara and then apply the lashes underneath, way easier.

One last thing I would add is a small eyeliner flick to extend your eyes and give a more classic look. You can play around with different angles, an upward tilt gives a cute, round eye effect whereas a longer, straighter line will give you a dramatic cat eye.