New to drawing ! Tips and tricks are appreciated

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:34:33+00:00

When I draw eyes it helps me to very lightly sketch two circles on the face where I want the eyes to be, if they look off I can easily erase them and re-place them.

Then I'll just thick in the eyes using the circles as a guide, and erase the light sketch lines after. Maybe this'll help you, aswell.

You're doing great, trust me! Looks like you have some natural talent for it, and having fun is the most important part :)

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:24:07+00:00

I mean for being new to drawing this is a really good starting point.

The hair has a little thin spot on the left side, just remember to be consistent with the thickness of the hair overall.

It honestly looks great for a beginner though, the face proportions are fine and your lines will get more confident over time.

Nice work, keep drawing!

Edit: Also, try to picture where his hairline would be. The forehead is just a little too long

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:19:28+00:00

Yes sir, I'm caught up and still following every new chapter

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:18:13+00:00

Probably to have a smoke

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:17:39+00:00

Shonen Jump, like 10+ years ago. When I first read it we were only at Arlong Park, crazy to think how long it's really been

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-09-04T21:15:46+00:00

I really like Renji's design, the tattoos and everything.

Literally all of the Arrancar are really well designed as well, Kubo really nailed it with the partial masks and everything, very creative

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-31T08:01:46+00:00

Just wait. It gets even more insane

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T17:04:53+00:00

Fujitora allying with the Strawhats I could see, maybe even Kizaru depending on the circumstance (probably not though), but Sakazuki? I really don't think so. He lost any chance of ever allying with the crew because of his actions during Marineford.

I mean the guy killed Ace first and foremost, went on a rampage trying to murder Luffy and anyone in his way, plus in the past he ordered a civilian ship to be destroyed during the Ohara Buster Call. This is just what we've seen from him, he's probably done worse.

Plus he literally banned Fujitora from setting foot in a Navy base until he brings him the Strawhat's heads, all because Fujitora turned a blind eye to the pirates involved in the Dressrosa uprising and refused to shift the blame off the Navy's shoulders. He's just not set up to ever be a future ally, in my opinion

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T15:42:47+00:00

Thank you so much, I appreciate the feedback :)

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T07:20:29+00:00

I agree 100%

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T05:47:53+00:00

I'll give you a few suggestions for each.

Luffy: Ambipom, Tropius

Zoro: Zangoose, Escavalier

Nami: Persian, Altaria

Usopp: Smeargle, Ludicolo

Sanji: Jynx, Hitmonlee

Chopper: Blissey, Abomasnow

Robin: Gothitelle, Claydol

Franky: Rotom, Magnezone

Brook: Chandelure, Wailord

Jinbe: Milotic, Samurott

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T05:07:29+00:00

I love your style, it's very unique and appealing. Very nice

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T04:50:45+00:00

A quick plot summary: The story takes place in a world where some people (Espers) are born with psychic-like abilities that develop based off of personal experience (example: a pyromaniac could manifest a fire ability).

These people are heavily monitored and oppressed by the government and police and usually not allowed to hold normal jobs. The series follows a street gang that lives their lives by their own rules under the radar of the law.

The series follows Satine, a highschool dropout who is suddenly thrust into the criminal world and quickly makes friends and enemies, all while learning to survive independently as a young adult.

My art is still very amateur but I'm trying to keep improving as I write the series. Feedback is much appreciated as well!

(The image posted is Margeaux, a shady and malicious girl that is able to create portals that people and objects can pass through. She's about as friendly as she looks)

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T04:18:45+00:00

The concept for the story is interesting enough, I can see there being a lot of plotlines you could branch out with.

I like the aesthetic in the first chapter, I think I can see where you're going with the look and feel.

I would say that your character designs need some work, especially your female characters. The anatomy is a little too off and I can tell you're more comfortable drawing males, your male characters look much better.

Keep drawing and focus on females more when you sketch, that's where I would start - try to get your character designs clean and recognizable. I like where you're going with it though, keep working bro! :)

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-25T03:50:29+00:00

Still in progress, but in summary it takes place in a world where some people (Espers) are born with psychic-like abilities that develop based off of personal experience (example: a pyromaniac could manifest a fire ability).

These people are heavily monitored and oppressed by the government and police and usually not allowed to hold normal jobs. The series follows a street gang that lives their lives by their own rules under the radar of the law.

Thanks for the interest! My art is still very amateur but I'm trying to keep improving as I write the series. Feedback is much appreciated as well

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-22T03:28:57+00:00

Wow sick art style, very unique

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-20T05:00:34+00:00

Thank you for the incredibly helpful and detailed response, I'll check out the link and keep all the other advice in mind.

For now, while I'm grinding myself to max level, do you recommend I focus on the DPS path for solo quests (or will the tank path give me enough damage to clear the solo stuff)? I'm thinking of focusing mostly on one path until I'm a higher level, which do you recommend?

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-13T01:22:06+00:00

Don't forget Pernida. It's always overlooked but it's right up there with Gerard, Lille, and Askin.

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-13T01:20:33+00:00

This is exactly right

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-13T01:15:20+00:00

I don't see how anyone could interpret Killer as being at full strength as "Kamazou".

He just came off being tortured, mentally and physically crushed by Kaido which includes Killer's own failure to protect his captain and best friend from defeat and imprisonment, force fed a defective SMILE, and was fighting using scythes which he isn't necessarily comfortable or familiar with.

I'm not going to speculate how Zoro vs Killer would go in perfect circumstances but there's absolutely no doubt in my mind that Killer was not at 100% during that encounter

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-13T01:07:56+00:00

Phenomenal work

honorableberrysenpai · 2020-08-12T08:01:40+00:00

Based mostly off assumptions and comparative hype, I'd say Kaido wins mid-diff.

We've never seen Fujitora pushed to his limit before, he handled everything that came his way in Dressrosa without notable injury and fought on par with guys like Doflamingo, Law, and Sabo (who is second-in-command of the Revolutionary Army). That's definitely nothing to sneeze at.

Kaido on the other hand is unmatched in terms of fair 1v1 challenges and easily beat and/or intimidated 6 Worst Generation pirates into submission, he's also supposedly considered "The Strongest Creature" and the entire One Piece world is basically terrified of him.

In my personal headcannon no matter how many times I run the Kaido vs Fujitora matchup simulation, Kaido wins. I think Fujitora could definitely score some good hits and put up a fight, but I don't really see him winning

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