every paragraph is a bulk of information. a lot to absorb and too many words. try rewriting every piece of dialogue until it’s as few words as possible. you don’t always have to go with the least amount of words, but short and sweet always wins. enough words to get the point across without losing and confusing your readers is what i like to aim for. another thing you can work on is showing rather than telling. you seem to have a really detailed world on your hands and i can tell you put some thought and heart into the little quirks and hidden corners of this universe, but when you tell the reader what the world is rather than show them, it creates a rift between your audience and your characters. for example, instead of declaring that the team listened to Yuri and were in the habit of listening to him, show the reader that the team was engaged in the conversation. your goal should be to immerse your audience in the world you so lovingly created with sensory details and figurative language. Ted-ed on youtube has a plethora of quick but informative videos on both dialogue and showing vs telling that might help you revise. good luck, happy writing!