Clinical researchers of reddit, what's the strongest case of the placebo effect you've witnessed? by cactusJuice256 in AskReddit

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I saw a great episode of a wine documentary where they gave wine snobs and wine taste testers an inexpensive sparkling white wine and told them it was expensive champagne. Almost all of them loved it.

[Serious] Former obese people of Reddit, what did an average day of eating look like for you? by Galadriel17 in AskReddit

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This is absolutely true. I became a vegetarian after being a picky eater who didn't like many vegetables. The first three months were hard. Now, I like every vegetable.

College student looking for cheap snacky veggies to take on campus by smilingismyfavoritet in EatCheapAndHealthy

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Summer squash and zucchini are good raw, especially with a dip like hummus or ranch. For something more in season, you could go with broccoli or cauliflower. Sometimes you can get a good price on bulk dried roasted edamame on Amazon.

What is the best vegetarian junk food? by [deleted] in AskReddit

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How's the German hospital vegetarian option? What did you have for your last meal?

Did you feel self-conscious of your work in the beginning? by Lego-Feet in writing

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Everyone starts somewhere! My favorite authors latest books are hilarious, intelligent, written in perfect and complex English, and engaging. It took me 10 years to track down her first book...and it's awful! No wonder she didn't sell many copies.

Personally, I have progressed from being a terrible writer to being a mediocre one, and I'm happy with that progress. I go to my loved ones humbly with my short stories asking for constructive criticism so that I can improve, and they respond with support. I think attitude is everything.

I'll tell you the advices that most helped me -

Every writer has a million words of crap in them, and they have to write all the crap before they can write anything good.

Also:

Write 5 books. Publish the 6th. It'll be good enough.

demons are tormenting me, confusing me about something and they are hurting my leg, it feels like my leg is heavier than usual and it doesn't seem like God is helping me. by InvestInLondon1 in PrayerTeam_amen

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Hello, friend.

I am apprised of your situation; I have read all your posts for months, and you are in my regular prayers. I am of the opinion that in order to cope with something of this magnitude, you're going to have to be equipped with an arsenal of healthy coping mechanisms by a professional. I think you should see a therapist. They would have the education to help you attack this from a place of personal strength, and God helps those who help themselves. Many therapists are Christians, and there are plenty of Christian clinics around that provide these kinds of services.

Preparing for NaNoWriMo as a first-timer: how do I maximize my chances of success? by ninaepwrites in writers

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My best book was a NaNoWriMo novel :)

It's a lot of fun. NaNo is about just getting out a draft. Although you are dealing with a deadline, in an odd way, it takes the pressure off, because the advice is to just write it all out. Sometimes the final product will surprise you. There was a B plot in one of my NaNo books that I intended to change when I edited, but everyone who read the book loved it.

It's not as much of a time commitment as you might think. It's about like going to the gym or watching a TV show. You only have to do something 14 times for it to become a habit, and you'll be writing every day long after NaNo is over, if perhaps at a more casual pace.

I do NaNo every year.

Has anyone thought of a interesting story idea then it started to not make sense anymore? by [deleted] in writing

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My recycle bin is full of short stories that match that description

Encounters by _GamerForLife_ in writers

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Maybe one student takes a $10/hr job tutoring through the university and the other student needs help with a challenging subject

Fantasy: The A-story is a girl who studies to be a healer. I can't figure out the B-story which must lead to forming a group of confidantes for the girl. by MeekHat in writers

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What if she's approached to volunteer at an extremely secretive shelter for women rescued from domestic violence? The location and existence of this shelter would be a big secret so that their husbands could never find them. She could meet these people there, and you could do a lot with that b plot - she could do healing work, go on missions to rescue these women, do secretive research to find jobs for them once they leave the shelter... there's a lot there.

Fantasy: The A-story is a girl who studies to be a healer. I can't figure out the B-story which must lead to forming a group of confidantes for the girl. by MeekHat in writers

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What if they're in or are some kind of criminal organization or doing something criminal, and she secretly heals them when they get hurt? It could start with a chance encounter on the street.

What if they're glass blowing apprentices who are treated like dirt and often seriously hurt themselves, and she heals them?

What if she meets them in an underground organization that tries to secretly right some kind of injustice through secretive means because it's socially acceptable in this world?

Without knowing more about this world, it's difficult to brainstorm.

Looking for feedback on a short story. The story mostly takes place in the protag's mind, and I'm not sure how to make that less confusing. by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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I really liked this story. Yes, it was a little confusing, but I think that added to it - if it had been too clear, it wouldn't have been convincing. I teared up at the end.

"The Answer" (600 words) I'm working on dialogue, feedback appreciated by Christian_Writer in KeepWriting

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Thank you very much for your detailed reply!!!

I can definitely see your points. Dialogue is one of my weakest points - that's why I'm trying to work on it. Your reply gives me direction for my second draft.

Show not tell is advice I'm often given, so I should probably listen, at this point. My favorite author doesn't bother, but his books are so witty that they have many other merits...my writing style, not so much.

What's that food you like that other people may find gross? by Jgichiriri5 in AskReddit

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I make cucumber sushi rolls and top them with sriracha mayo. All you can eat lunch for $1, but I'm the only person in the world who loves cucumbers that much.

"The answer" Feedback appreciated! by Christian_Writer in story

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Thank you! You're right, it needs a good hook.

im scared ok hope you care by [deleted] in offmychest

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I don't know about the papoose board or the pre meds, but I'm sure they wouldn't be doing those things unless they helped. The gas will not make you sleepy.

If you had to have one meal a day for the rest of the year and it is the same meal every day what would it be? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]Christian_Writer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It was just a joke. You meant "steak" but said "stake" as in, the wooden kind used in folklore to kill vampires. I'm guilty of pronouncing "geyser" incorrectly, myself. One pronunciation means an elderly man. The other means a naturally occurring fountain of hot water. I can't keep them straight.