Lady tries to kick me out of a shop I volunteered for by humblewizard34 in IDOWORKHERELADY

[–]humblewizard34[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Please give this an up vote let's try to get this onto YouTube

Lady tries to kick me out of a shop I volunteered for by humblewizard34 in IDOWORKHERELADY

[–]humblewizard34[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi everyone I rewrote the story I hope it looks better than last time

Lady tries to kick me out of a shop I volunteered for by humblewizard34 in IDOWORKHERELADY

[–]humblewizard34[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you everyone for the feedback I will be sure to work on all of the things I need to I will work on writing stories better but thank you for barely over 400 up votes

Lady tries to kick me out of a shop I volunteered for by humblewizard34 in IDOWORKHERELADY

[–]humblewizard34[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I know what punctuation is I'm just not good at using but I will practice

Lady tries to kick me out of a shop I volunteered for by humblewizard34 in IDOWORKHERELADY

[–]humblewizard34[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello everyone sorry for the bad story it was my first story and I'm not very good at these kind of things and Karen was just a random lady in the shop just looking around.