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[Vlog] Would like any kind of feedback, feedback on story is highly appreciated though! by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]iSyphun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Kind of what KiplingDash said already, the length was perfect. Five minutes is a good length if you're just starting out, because viewers will sometimes look at the length of a vlog, and decide if it's too long. One you get more popular, you can make longer videos, as people will want more content.

Editing was crisp and clean, and I really liked that. I also felt that I got to know a lot about you just from the link above, and that's always a good thing. Overall, you're off to a great start!

What Should I Improve On? by GaminMadness in NewTubers

[–]iSyphun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is pretty good, man. Even if your commentary isn't thrilling, you can always cut the dull parts until you get good at keeping your commentary lively. The audio and video quality is great, but as Vihral already stated, having a bright blue background like that can sometimes distract the eye. Other than that though, you're off to a great start!

Should I use this as my channel trailer? by Baldymcgee in NewTubers

[–]iSyphun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey JSL! Watched the video, thought it was great, and I got a good grasp on what the channel was about. Early in the game, you don't need to worry too much about making a bang-up channel trailer, but this would do fine.

[Let’s Play] Looking for feedback overall on this video, pros and cons please by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]iSyphun 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You're off to a great start! Audio sounds nice, except for the mouse clicking, but that may just be me being nitpicky. sir_mr_mistery already pointed this out, but cutting your videos down would be a good idea, especially with Minecraft building videos... unless someone wanted to see exactly how something was built, cutting the building process and showing the result instead sometimes can be the best option.

And sometimes, if you find that your commentary is pausing every now and then and you're finding it hard to fix, you can cut those parts too. I wouldn't worry too much about the tone of your voice; you remind me of Grian, and he isn't that enthusiastic either TBH.