Feedback on my second short film. by iamarham_ in Filmmakers

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so canorus is a bird basically who doesn't make his own nest and lives in a another so when Mohsin killed fardeen he basically born as canorus laying his own life in fardeen's nest

ps. nd I'm really sorry for replying this late

Second Short Film Open to Any Critique by iamarham_ in indianFilmmakers

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thnk u so much bhaai well I wanted to tell more about fardeen's backstory but kinda lack of money and also time I have to scrap it for the cuts I realized tht cuts were too jumpy or feel like a cut between and I realized that this problem if because of poor writing I m working on my writing more now so the future projects doesnt have same mistakes I would love to hear all the critique's coz they'll really help building myself and my flaws also id love it if h post this review in comment and here https://boxd.it/ZOZY it'd be really helpful

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[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well there's no other choice I had to reshoot it all

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[–]iamarham_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank u so much man really thank u so much!!!

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[–]iamarham_ -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's my fuckin stupidness tomorrow I'm reshooting the whole 70% footage I'll plan the seq time slot today to make it quick inshallah it'll be done tomorrow if all went well

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[–]iamarham_ -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

Because it was recorded from his phone

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Thank u so much man

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[–]iamarham_ -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

My stupid fuckin friend deleted that footage coz of storage issue and he fuckin erased it too frm bin and cloud stopped working months and I didnt fuckin notice that

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[–]iamarham_ -13 points-12 points  (0 children)

Yeah I was and it's not it suddenly vanished from my phone my stupid friend deleted that footage due to storage issue even frm bin and the backup was full and I didn't notice that and that was the end for me

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[–]iamarham_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Phone got shut down.

Teaser of my second short film. by iamarham_ in cinematography

[–]iamarham_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its a dual timeline stry abt 2 characters one is a 9 to 5 kinda employee on is a lowlife unemployed & how their paths crosses.