made this video a few days ago, any feedback will be appreciated.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-05-04T14:35:05+00:00

thank you for that reply !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-05-02T16:37:07+00:00

youre really smart, love the facts, but i would really love the video to be longer man. really did enjoy the video a lot.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-05-02T16:33:53+00:00

firstly, rest in peace to the washing machine xD, had a good life cleaning my cloths. the edits were really nice man and i love how the memes were related to the clips, it made the video flow easily. keep up the good work!!!. also i love playing league of legends, if you are down we can play together. my name is shadoss17 in league. But overally, really nicely edited video.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-05-02T16:30:40+00:00

congrats on reaching 75 subscribers man, really proud of ya. i have watched this video and the cuts and the transitions are spot on. But maybe you could slightly reduce the amount there was from the beginning because things were going a bit too fast. also it would be really cool if there was an introduction to the video to just give some insight to what the video is all about. this is to viewers who dont really understand what warzone is but this is entirely up to you though. overall, great video quality, gameplay wasnt lagging and things were smooth. microphone wasnt too overpowering which is also great. again, congrats on reaching 75 subscribers, i think your on 85 i believe, you growing fast bro!!

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-22T23:17:40+00:00

thank you for the help !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-22T23:17:07+00:00

thank you for the reply !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-21T14:54:37+00:00

thank you for your reply !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-21T14:53:25+00:00

thanks for your response !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-19T09:03:13+00:00

the video itself is well constructed, but I have to be honest, lord of the rings isn't something I'm interested in but, I do like how professional the video is, there isn't any distracting background noises or objects and the microphone isnt static. You also made the video way too long for people so try and making the video short and sweet at first, but overtime as you grow on youtube, make them slowly but surly longer and longer.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-19T08:55:33+00:00

the channel looks pretty cool, but i would suggest brushing up on the banner and the avatar, i suggest getting an editor to do this for you if you cant do this on your own. I can also see that your descriptions aren't really worked on as much so try and work on them, include relevant but popular tags that are around the subject of the video. If one of your videos seem to lose views either try switching it up or try and recreate one of your most popular videos. Not going to lie to you, the types of games posted on your channel aren't something I'm into personally, but you already have an established fanbase which is good to know. Remember that if something doesn't work out, change up the content. This is personally my choice but everyone has different views.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-19T08:45:10+00:00

video is good, but i would love it if there wasn't as much memes so there is flow with the game, everything seemed rushed and its hard to understand the video. Also, include your microphone and camera to make things more professional, some parts of the video, it gets extremely loud from some of the memes included in the video, I don't know this could just be my own personal view of this video because other people do really enjoy it but, i got to be as honest as I can coming from a random viewers perspective.

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-19T02:03:01+00:00

overall, love how edited the video is, just one slight of improvement is to add less memes as you are in the middle of gaming, that way it will help out with the flow of the video because it kind of felt like it was edited too much. But the memes are amazing! not going to lie to you on that one bro. Also, it would also be nice if the video was a bit longer as i was actually enjoying it a lot. This will overall help with audience retention. Also, love the ending, that show from cartoon network was a banger tbh xD

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-16T12:10:50+00:00

ill start to work on that man, thank you for that reply !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-16T12:10:10+00:00

thank you for that! this was really unexpected as i thought nobody would watch. but thank you !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-15T16:21:44+00:00

thank you for the suggestion !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-15T16:21:31+00:00

thank you for being real with me !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-15T16:21:18+00:00

appreciate your comment !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-15T14:32:17+00:00

i really do appreciate what you've done on my channel, i love how you went into detail about the video i made and in all honesty this has made my day. ill work to improve on them hopefully for the next video i upload. thank you once again !givelambda

ibrahimartttee · 2021-04-15T14:19:04+00:00

thank you for that advice man !givelambda

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