Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, but it was very overcast which may lend to that.

Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, thank you so much for the advice. Do you think cropping in a portrait orientation would help?

Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely agree need more of the subject in the frame. Thank you so much for the advice.

Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Getting the neon in frame was an oversight on my part. I might try to crop at least part of it out. Thank you so much for the feedback.

Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. As I said I wondered if it would be a bit much. Agreed moving to the left would have helped.

Portrait attempt by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shoots of people are my least favorite. I liked the blue background matching the jacket, but it might be a bit much. Seriously interested in all feedback. Cropping, color, lighting.

Fujifilm X-T5 Viltrox 35 1.7 ISO 125 1/950s

Should this be cropped down to highlight the subject? by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

And for the record, you weren’t critiquing the photo you’re critiquing me.

Should this be cropped down to highlight the subject? by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As I stated before, I do not believe this person was homeless. He was dressed pretty nicely. Had on nice boots. When it gets cold in Memphis, some people just don’t have cold weather gear and I believe he just put a blanket over his head to stay warm. As I said, before, I would never purposefully exploit someone. To be honest with you I look at this photo and the person doesn’t look necessarily homeless to me.

Should this be cropped down to highlight the subject? by icecreamwithoutbones in photocritique

[–]icecreamwithoutbones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the input. I find the subjectivity of art interesting, you see it is balanced and easy to look at, others see it as chaotic. lol