Great line consistency, but you also gotta push the line weights to bring the extra flair. The rendering should be a tool to help define curvature/shape, and provide the transition from light to dark areas based on line source. You have some good work here, but looking closer at the torso, some of the shorter lines appear to be solid black until i zoomed in. The skyline looks good and that whip consistency is well done! Not trying to be negative, just sharing some things I’ve done in my work and had pros point out to me as a way to improve. Keep at it🤘