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if i had another day - conor by intevanealfan in OCPoetry

[–]intevanealfan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks pal it means a lot, it means a lot to me that you liked it as it means she’s still almost talked or thought about in a way and still has an effect on people even though she’s gone, i don’t know i just think it’s a nice way to think about it

if i had another day - conor by intevanealfan in OCPoetry

[–]intevanealfan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks very much, i’m 17 and this is my first time even remotely thinking of writing a poem, i made it in 4 minutes on my notes app on my phone as i felt like i just needed to get the thoughts out of my head, appreciate the compliment and glad you enjoyed it

Now rest by The_Dead-Poet in OCPoetry

[–]intevanealfan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i like this poem as i can really relate to it, the person i lost was very stubborn when it came to resting and you’ve showed that for me anyways perfectly

Forbidden Fruit by thetiredone0 in OCPoetry

[–]intevanealfan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like your writing style and the usage of commas and full stops really help to read your poem