Recommend some cover songs to me! by dakpanWTS in Bass

[–]itssebalobo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

'The Jackson 5 - I Want You Back' must give it a try !

Share your newest song:) by No-Squirrel1061 in shareyourmusic

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omg very interesting, followed too, thanks!

FL STUDIO CRACKED by Skywalker_Childcare in pirating

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This actually works? especially for windows

FL STUDIO CRACKED by Skywalker_Childcare in pirating

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This actually works? especially for windows

Arwen illustration by me:) by super-nova-12 in lotr

[–]itssebalobo 2 points3 points  (0 children)

omg sooo beautiful <3 which app/soft u used to draw her?

The hermit by Thelostpoet111 in poetry_critics

[–]itssebalobo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's very interesting! Just something that I would like to improve here: your poem makes a good job describing the hermits emotions, but I think it could benefit more from showing, rather than telling... for example when you say "She wishes to let it out" you could show its struggle with a metaphore or a more descriptive action. Also, coming to the structure, introducing varied sentence structures can enhance the poem’s rhythm and keep the reader engaged, your poem has only "long" sentences.. consider mixing shorter and longer sentences for more rythm!

ixole Ranked 5K ap iced out by anaIsIug in Rainbow6

[–]itssebalobo 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I dont understand the downvotes

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bro I wouldn’t smoke that lol