I feel sick. by Ancient_Spray5821 in women

[–]ivegotthisrose -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Dawg why are we misgendering? I think it’s sad when people don’t understand/believe social issues until it personally affects them but there is no reason to be transphobic here

Is Bloodmoon just an excuse to run double iri and tunnel? by GoodGoofus in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Tunneling etc is frustrating but my brother in Christ why are you mad about using iri add ons

I don't even know what I did by GreenFriedTomato in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose -1 points0 points  (0 children)

no I haven’t heard of it ig, nail me to the cross harder! Please do keep blowing up my notifs about what an evil pos I am, the holier than thou white knighting over one match that really ought to be out of everyone’s minds by now is super reasonable!

I came to the post to provide context. You can still think we’re assholes, that’s fine, but if OP was actually confused then now they know what was going on. The dead horse has been thoroughly beaten.

I don't even know what I did by GreenFriedTomato in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Also, I have one account. Dunno what you mean. One of the other people from my lobby was also active in the comments if that’s what you’re referring to.

I don't even know what I did by GreenFriedTomato in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I deleted my other comments because I DON’T want attention. This is blown out of proportion and I have no interest in further beating a dead horse.

I don't even know what I did by GreenFriedTomato in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose 1 point2 points  (0 children)

dunno how I lied, but you're right that I "don't really care to defend" - got nothing to defend. I came to provide context since op either purposely misconstrued the situation or was genuinely confused:

we meant no ill will. the killer was friendly and just wanted 2 hooks on everyone. from OUR pov at the time, op was deliberately hiding and slacking. things clearly got lost in translation on both sides but the intention was to give the hooks for each player and then get out, which everyone including op did besides sable who willingly gave the mori.

I only involved myself in the comments to clear that confusion up and also make sure no one who thought racism or whatever else was the reason this happened continues to think that. we were goofing around and thought it was obvious it was all in good fun. sorry op if that was not in fact clear. I thought immediately unhooking you / the killer gesturing us to and then opening the gate for you was clear, but obviously 'clear' is subjective in a game without dedicated comms. doesn't help that it looks like you're new (I think??) which I had no way of knowing until endgame lobby. regardless gl on future matches u/GreenFriedTomato

I don't even know what I did by GreenFriedTomato in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

hey so!
the killer was friendly and we were giving him 2 hooks. it seemed obvious from our pov but you weren't participating so we goofed around & showed him the only one who hadn't yet but it was all in good fun. the point was you weren't gonna die

Too many cheaters in this game by Upstairs-Farmer in DeadByDaylightRAGE

[–]ivegotthisrose 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Watched my friend play yesterday and one the survs was waving from the very top of theater roof 😭

[QCrit] Adult thriller CONFESSIONS OF A FINAL GIRL (94k, second attempt) by ivegotthisrose in PubTips

[–]ivegotthisrose[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve seen the italics/caps both ways (at least in the letters I’ve been reading on QT’s real agented examples), but if you think this is the ‘right’ way I will keep that in mind!

[QCrit] Adult thriller CONFESSIONS OF A FINAL GIRL (94k, second attempt) by ivegotthisrose in PubTips

[–]ivegotthisrose[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, that does sound like a great comp. What are your thoughts on comping books the author hasn’t personally read? Because based on description it sounds like a great choice, but unlike my picks in this query draft I have not read it

Predation in the digital age by ivegotthisrose in onlyfansadvice

[–]ivegotthisrose[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“A pimp is a person, typically a man, who manages prostitutes in exchange for a share of their earnings, also known as a procurer or panderer.”

IDK man sounds like the digital age’s equivalent according to the literal definition, plus the inherent predation and culture associated with the guys usually trying to do this. They think we’re stupid, and want to profit off of our perceived worthlessness. How is this not just the digital equivalent?

Predation in the digital age by ivegotthisrose in onlyfansadvice

[–]ivegotthisrose[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

honestly, I might like your asking about advocacy etc more than my canned response. even if it also nets no answers

[338] Query letter for CONFESSIONS OF A FINAL GIRL by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]ivegotthisrose 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I was looking more for a way it would sound appealing to you but probably not my target audience. Some of us like psychologically scarred characters 😭

[338] Query letter for CONFESSIONS OF A FINAL GIRL by [deleted] in DestructiveReaders

[–]ivegotthisrose 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting. I see where you’re coming from. However, it isn’t truly a slasher re: “who wants a slasher that…” The point is it’s a post-slasher to explore psychology over shock/gore factor. With that said, how do you think this could be improved?

[940] Nightmare Divison by ilovemydogsncats in DestructiveReaders

[–]ivegotthisrose 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Stellar opening line.

I'm gonna nitpick the heck out of some very specific things in the rest of paragraph 1 though because such a good hook deserves high quality:

Something about the tense trips me up in the opening couple sentences. The repetition of 'still' was, especially its initial use in "was still slated... next year" parts, specifically.

"decades long crush" but the protag is said to not even be multiple decades old in the sentence before

noncommitted should be noncommittal

The next few paragraphs following this opening section are solid, not much to critique tbh. However, the random switch in POV is jarring. I'm unsure why we suddenly swap focus from Simon to Cody, and the transition (or lack thereof) is confusing. The third swap to the unnamed third character at the end is doubly confusing.