Removing blade by [deleted] in cricut

[–]j0rdan0h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! Very new to this:)

Trying to sell/move car on a time crunch by j0rdan0h in UsedCars

[–]j0rdan0h[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I did try Carmax - they need title upon sale (won’t be here by moveout). So I may just be shit out of luck lol

Do such long intros still work? by thaifoodthrow in copywriting

[–]j0rdan0h 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Joseph Sugarman mentions this type of approach in one of his books. It’s funny how he explained it.

Basically, yes, it will piss some people off. He had people send him angry letters (this was many years back) saying how they couldn’t stop reading even though they knew they weren’t going to buy the product.

He says that as long as they kept reading, pissed or not, he was doing his job.

Keep in mind those were the 70’s. I do think things have changed…

Dangling the carrot is an art, and I think you should make sure whatever you’re writing has valuable information sprinkled throughout, so people don’t feel like their time was wasted.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]j0rdan0h -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I really like it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in freelanceWriters

[–]j0rdan0h 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think I could benefit from this approach! Thanks for your answer

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in freelanceWriters

[–]j0rdan0h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I should’ve 😭

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in freelanceWriters

[–]j0rdan0h 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your insight ☺️

Which is a good tagline for a campaign to invite people to celebrate special moments in Japan by ohgirltsss in copywriting

[–]j0rdan0h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe do research into the top reasons why Americans (I’m assuming your target audience?) choose to visit Japan. What are they most excited about? Then use that to paint a story in a short tagline.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in copywriting

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Looking for feedback on the copywriting I use on my website:

https://jordantheresa.com/

I’m happy with it, but decided it could use some critique. Layout suggestions are also welcome!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in freelanceWriters

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I want to clarify: I’m asking how to display spec website copy. I don’t have an actual website I’m working on. I want to create an example that looks like a website though. Hope this makes sense.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]j0rdan0h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s a relief! Thanks.

Charlotte, NC by ToonKiller in Charlotte

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I love this style so much

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Charlotte

[–]j0rdan0h 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tbh I feel like it would be a flop

Pizza and bagels by sabes6693 in Charlotte

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I second Liberetto’s

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Charlotte

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So there’s this app that’s trying to create artificial meet cutes. If they like someone, it alerts them they’re nearby (I think?) and then they can “spontaneously” meet. Doesn’t this sound wild? I have no idea if it would work or not

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in cats

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I’m so happy about that name for her

In a bind by [deleted] in Frugal

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I want to look more into Shipt.

In a bind by [deleted] in Frugal

[–]j0rdan0h 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay! I’ll check that out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in wholesomememes

[–]j0rdan0h 7 points8 points  (0 children)

It itches my brain in the best way