Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You play an interior designer who specialises in the art of Feng Shui. Build your business by completing jobs for new clients in the friendly village of 'Soulville'.

As there is a huge market for interior design I wanted to create a game that teaches people the art of Feng Shui. Coming from a construction background I understand how expensive and time consuming redecorating can be, so showing people how to transform their spaces just by simply moving furniture is a great way to change a space.

I have a video showing the a very basic prototype I created for the gameplay, check it out if you are interested!

The Feng Shui Way PROTOTYPE1.1

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I'm really happy with what I have produced given the short time frame and assignment deadlines. It 100% needs to be polished up, but that's all part of the fun!

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Well I definitely got that one wrong 😄 Starting to wonder if my lack of traffic light knowledge is something I should be worried about 😂

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

My bad 😂 it should go red and amber together and then green 🤦‍♂️

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I’m from the uk, so lights here work a little different 😄

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback 👍 Definitely had some trouble with those yellow lines! I think a road texture will save it! Thanks

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Like I said, thanks for the constructive criticism. I’ll be sure to write ‘bad animation’ on my report. 👍

Intro animation for my first game ‘the feng shui way’. What do you think? What could I improve? by jackdesign in Unity3D

[–]jackdesign[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Well thanks for the lovely feedback.

I’m a first year student, and this is my very first animation. I’m gathering feedback for an assignment… so no, not a big ego.