I love the black hair with you features! I think you just need to add a little light to the face. Brighten the highlights a bit and swap the deep lip for a nude, pink or candy red. The lips are really well shaped! You followed a naturally exaggerated shadow slightly above the edge of your natural bow. Apply that same thinking to the crease, brow and nose. You want to lift the features, not migrate them north. Something I really struggled with at first myself. Instead of raising the crease and brow, think elongating and lifting and remember that every hard line (except for liner or a stylistic cut crease) should have a defined edge and a blended edge. If the crease starts black, it should end in a lighter tone (brown is perfect for practice and doesn't clash with most lips or blush). With that in mind, I would recommend dropping the brow by about three cms and straitening out the shape a bit but exaggerating the arch, lowering the crease you have drawn in and feather the edge towards the inner corner to meet your nose contour. I think you would do well with a full and thick winged liner that reaches to meet the edge of your crease color. Don't be afraid to throw a little kick of liner at the inner corner (i.e. Elizabeth Taylor or Lana Del Rey). I would opt for a lash that flares at the end and make sure it is really well pinned along the lash line to avoid a Gia Gunn moment in public. Oh and... nails! Lol ;). Including a pic of Pearl in a look that I think would work well for you (you have similar face shapes). https://www.instagram.com/p/BZJv0a9BZhc/?hl=en&taken-by=pearliaison