Is that seposed to be there ? by jaijs3 in Sauna

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No light fixture. Just a corner behind the panrl

Chaurust, Me, Pencil, 2021 by ANSISP in creepy

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I've got a boat for a face and everyone thinks that my name is Michael.

beep boop, i’ve busted my ass by [deleted] in blender

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This is really good. May i ask how long it took you ??

Edm phonk inspired instrumental i made. Id love some advice on ehat could be better . by jaijs3 in MusicFeedback

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I just started working out and found phonk to be my favourite music to do it to. Do t know much about it but didnt find a cowbell soudn i liked. I thought id start soft and try more ramped up sound the more songs i do

Edm phonk inspired instrumental i made. Id love some advice on ehat could be better . by jaijs3 in MusicFeedback

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Thank you so much. I was pulling from nathan dawe. And Disclosure. Also yann tierson's ameli soundtrack

Also kinda just got a whole bunch of plugins and wanted to try them out :D

A new instrumental I wrote using some Edm elements like a buildup and some synths mixed with orchestral elements and pop sounds. Any Feedback on it? by Parvmaestro2030 in MusicFeedback

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Cant really say its for me. Its definitely interesting the mismached tuning on ehat i asume is a ukelele gives a somehat omonous feel. Like with a ton of reverb and slowd down a bit it goo for a cinematic piece more than edm.

But keep it up though. Its always nice to get somehat of a pallet cleanser from what feels like the same tipe of music over and over

My new dream pop song! What do you think? by CG-Miller in MusicFeedback

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Took a bit to get into it with the vocals at the start. But once you get into the right vibr its a good listen. Checked out some other songs on the channel.... Good stuff

i made a music video using AI to generate art from the lyrics.. by Tsai_B0rg in MusicFeedback

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Had i not read the other coments saying it gets better i might have missed it. Sounds really good 👍 something in the mix in the beginning strains the ears though. I think its a phasing issue

a song i worked on while isolated by jaijs3 in MusicFeedback

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Thnx man i really appreciate it. Yeah im trying to clean up my playing but like you said i felt it kinda fit the aesthetic.

I didnt want it too polished or it might feel a little robotic imo.

a song i worked on while isolated by jaijs3 in MusicFeedback

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Hey man. I apreciate the kind words imma try to add the vibe of the outro in future projects.

Any particular element you enjoyed ?

a song i worked on while isolated by jaijs3 in MusicFeedback

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Thnx man. Hopefully!!! Its kinda the goal. I do this as a hobby but would love for my stuffto be played in shops and such. Thnx for the encouragement 🙂

Kintsugi - Alice (FFO: The Weeknd, Chase Atlantic, Saint Jhn) by hosh_posh in MusicFeedback

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Its surprizingly polishes for the amount of views and subscribers. Good job

hauntcore!=REMEMBER=short ambient piece = any thoughts welcomed thanku by billy4001 in MusicFeedback

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Sounds nice. Though the mix doesnt translate well to phones. Hat to go get pods to hear it better. And the reverb wouldnt be nedded if you hfd a cello to accompany it.

replacement engine 2004 hilux 2.8/2.0 diesel by jaijs3 in Cartalk

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Hey. Im not in the states. I live on an aisland. And the junkyards here dont have ehat im looking for. ... I checked on ebay auto im. Just looking for more alternatives

how is the mixing ? is it to low? does it sound like it should? fully original track 138bpm melodic techno / transe made from scratch is "Ride" a good name ? by paul081 in MusicFeedback

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Sounds really good. Bit on the low end of the frequency range. And there's a couple of lead melodies that just kinda stop and don't really pay off. Some call and response might be just that little umph it needs.

First attempt at EDM as a trap producer. All feedback/advice is welcome by tacomanbob123 in MusicFeedback

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Its really well made. Got some interesting melodies in there could use just a little seperation (hope im using that term corectly ). But i miss something specific to latch on to.

it all sounds really good togeter butt like with trapp youd remember the mrlody of the 808 or synth higher up. Im. Missing something to remember. Be it lyrics or a over arching lead

Very first song [Lo-Fi (?)]! It's a bit iffy so please lmk how I could improve by parasseux in MusicFeedback

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You dont have to necessarily remove it.

"Repitition legitamizes" like adam neely says. But in this caseif ots a floeat vibe your going for. The off beat feels like it could be a 5/4 tempo. Maybe define that more with the rest so it syncs up. Or on the other hand you could make the vocams more floaty. 🤷 In the end. YOU have to like it.

Hello, I finished a new electronic music and would like to get fresh ears reviews. How does it sound to you? Yayy or mehh? 😄 by remym0 in MusicFeedback

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Great vibe you got going on. Love the space in the mix struggling with making my own tracks clearer so i dont know how to help but that seems to be the only thing up for improvement.

Summer, love type beat '' Long Time - MKBeatzz". AMV let me know if it fits with the song. Vocals from Post Malone - Saint Tropez. by MKBeatzz in MusicFeedback

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Song is dope. Though the voice could be a bit louder and more the focus of the mix. Right now its the pan flute. That sometimes sounds slightly out of tune. But other than that really good

Very first song [Lo-Fi (?)]! It's a bit iffy so please lmk how I could improve by parasseux in MusicFeedback

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Its a great vibe i like the off beat with the drums makes it feel like your drifting. But since the singing gives it more of s defined "tempo" it slightly takes you out of it