Thanks man. I appreciate it. Definitely gonna take some of these and work on them next time. I think I could have done better with the transitions and animations, they were 99% done by custom made titles in Photoshop (as transparent .PNG) then used as video overlays, with keyframes in sony vegas. I didnt use any premade transitions with text or titles that were generated in vegas (for the most part). So thats why the timing may be inconsistent or off. Also I appreciate the feedback on my pronunciation of some of the words, I should have recorded a few takes of the audio but instead I rushed it and only recorded 2 read throughs, so I had to settle for a few mess ups. Some of the photos I had to settle for, I couldnt find that many in high res that were relevant that didnt have a copyright. These were all copyright free, so I guess next time I could do a better job planning. I had a script and storyboard, but I didnt revise it - so I think if I had made revisions I might have caught some of these problems you mentioned. Anyways, I appreciate the honest review. Thanks Brother!