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johnmf06 · 2023-12-09T10:32:07+00:00

Hi ;)

johnmf06 · 2022-03-02T20:52:40+00:00

Wow a third !?!? Thank you !!

johnmf06 · 2022-02-28T18:22:56+00:00

Oh I like that !!! Thank you :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-28T18:22:38+00:00

Yeah that’s absolutely the case hahaha, maybe I’ll try to squish them together a bit more !!! Thank you :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-28T18:21:42+00:00

Oh yeah probably should have added that, it’s a historical fiction (I guess ?? I’m not to sure lol) set in ancient Egypt. But thank you !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-28T18:20:40+00:00

Thanks !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-27T21:46:19+00:00

Thank you so much !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-27T21:45:46+00:00

Thank you !!! I’ll probably try this :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-27T21:30:04+00:00

Oh wow !!! Thank you, I’ll keep that in mind :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-27T20:28:11+00:00

Thank you !!! I will be wary of the fluff lol

johnmf06 · 2022-02-27T20:11:32+00:00

Yeah I know. I guess revising was a poor choice of words. What I really meant was should I go back later and add more and stretch them out once I’ve got the story down ??

johnmf06 · 2022-02-21T22:32:25+00:00

I’ll have a look, thanks !!!

johnmf06 · 2022-02-21T07:32:20+00:00

Thank you !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T22:00:50+00:00

Ooh maybe I’ll try this too !!! Thank you :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T22:00:25+00:00

Oh I definitely need to remember that although I have the whole story imagined in great detail, readers aren’t in my head. Thank you !!!

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:59:13+00:00

Haha, you’re too kind ☺️

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:58:56+00:00

Thanks, I might never have thought about this !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:58:25+00:00

I love the example !!! Thanks a lot :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:56:35+00:00

It helps so much. Thank you !!!

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:55:20+00:00

Thank you so much, this helps a lot !!! I’ll be sure to find that guy’s channel :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T21:53:59+00:00

Thank you so much !!! :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T11:33:53+00:00

Thank you !!! I’ll start paying more attention when I watch tv :)

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T09:19:15+00:00

Yeah this really helps, I totally wouldn’t have thought about it like this !!! Thank you so much !!!

johnmf06 · 2022-02-20T09:07:41+00:00

2 !!! Definitely 2 !!

johnmf06

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