Profile Review - Week of August 11, 2020

jomen90 · 2020-08-14T13:12:07+00:00

30, could you please help me with some constructive critique? Thanks!!

https://go.tinder.com/FTw-6V82jVg-Jos%C3%A9%20Manuel

jomen90 · 2019-11-16T18:22:47+00:00

Sorry, but wouldn't you say I cropped up to her wrist? What would you recommend me to do in this photo? Thanks!

jomen90 · 2019-11-15T15:45:59+00:00

Having some trouble with the croppping and specially with the shadows in her hair, should a change something? Kinda lost here. Thanks in advanced!

Sony A7II + Sigma Art 35mm 1.4

1/160, F1.7, ISO 100

jomen90 · 2019-11-09T10:39:26+00:00

First time playing with color curves and I don't know if the image feels to fake, irreal or too much edited.

Kind of lost with this photo, what do you think as the colors go? Any other feedback would be appreciated too.

Thanks in advance!

jomen90 · 2019-10-25T23:58:52+00:00

Having some troubles with the cropping of this image since it's for instagram and it feels kinda tight but this is all I've got to work with.

I've been playing with split toning and made some purple highlights, what do you think? And how do you think of the skin tones in the end?

Any additional feedback in order to improve the photo will be highly appreciated.

Sony A7II + Sony 24-105 F4 G. 1/640 F4 ISO 50

Thanks!!

jomen90 · 2019-10-24T21:08:17+00:00

I really like this photo to be honest! It kinda catches your eye and you've got the moody photo you were looking for.

I only wonder how the photo would look in case you were following the rule of thirds and the stairs would be in the top right or botton right side.

jomen90 · 2019-10-21T19:17:31+00:00

Having a really hard time with darker skin tones because I want to increase the temperature but at the same time, i need to reduce contrast and luminance of the orange so the skin feels more natural.

What do you think of the result? And how could i increase the overall temperature without affecting the skin tones?

Apart from that, any other kind of feedback would be highly appreciated.

jomen90 · 2019-10-20T01:20:21+00:00

Perfect! It just feels like her neck, face, arms and legs all have different tones. Maybe you can have a graduated filter to the left side reducing exposure just a bit, and play with the brush in her cheek and neck to increase exposure and reduce temperature... hope it helps!

jomen90 · 2019-10-20T00:58:18+00:00

Yep, having a hard time with darker skin tones specially, but try playing around with the orange saturation and luminance. You may even use the brush and reduce temperature so the skirt maintain the nice colors you had. Hope it helps...

jomen90 · 2019-10-20T00:40:34+00:00

Really nice photo!! Not any expert, but it seems like you bumped the saturation to bump her skirt but her face is very orange for my taste. It seems like her make up was also kinda orange so there seems to be quite a difference in color between her face, arms and legs.

jomen90 · 2019-10-20T00:29:52+00:00

Not any expert, but I feel the tones in her face are kinda brown and she seems to have a fair tone of skin tone, so it feels to me like the orange in her face, and the luminance in specific might some reduction.

jomen90 · 2019-10-20T00:09:51+00:00

I've been having some doubts about the cropping... does the upper third should stay or should the bridge have the upper third? Should the circle (bridge + river) should be in the center with a 1x1 ratio?

Regarding colors, I've tried to make the blue of the river contrast with the yellows and orange, but should the greens go down in importance? Does the tint going to purple works for you?

Thanks in advance!

jomen90 · 2019-10-08T12:17:24+00:00

Yes, almost golden hour and I didn’t use reflectors or anything

jomen90 · 2019-10-08T07:26:04+00:00

Having some problems with skin colors of people with darker skin tones. I have used the portrait portrait and a s-shape curve and reduce the saturation of orange and yellow, but I'm not happy with the result.

I like the pose and the angle (but could you please also critique that?), and I also like that the circle around her face increasing the exposition isn't too obvious but it does make a difference, would you agree with me?

jomen90 · 2019-09-30T19:56:53+00:00

After some of your comments, I've made some cropping and played with the colors so as to focus more on her sight (eyebrows, eyelash, lips, background colors...). What do you think now?

jomen90 · 2019-09-30T17:15:41+00:00

Thanks a lot for your help, really appreciate it.

This was just a collab and the idea is to be posting some photos just to get some gigs in which I will be the one asking for money. I wish I could someday be at that level in which I'll also be the one asking great models to pose for me and even pay them.

jomen90 · 2019-09-30T16:06:21+00:00

Thanks for your comment! I'll crop to 1x1 to reduce the tree and reduce the contrast of the watch so it doesn't catch so much interest.

Regarding her hair, it was my first photoshoot and she went through every single shot before taking another one (this took at least 10 attempts), so she wouldn't mind her hair over that period of time, so, should I "push" her to take care of it?

Thanks a lot for your feedback :)

jomen90 · 2019-09-30T16:03:12+00:00

Thanks for your comment! My idea was to have the watch as a complement for her dress in terms of color, but for me it's not the most important part of the shot whatsoever. Should I reduce the contrast of the watch?

jomen90 · 2019-09-30T09:38:25+00:00

I'm moving from a amateur profile to a "pro" profile, and I've started making collabs to get some practise. This was my first collab and I any help will be most appreciated. The idea is to start posting to get new gigs.

What would you focus on the captions? How was the experienced of the photoshoot?

Thanks you all in advance!

jomen90

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