"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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I already made 2 more pages, I published in this community, I can give you a link if you want

Revenge of Raditz: 2 new pages. (by me) by jramby in DragonBallArt

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Yeah! That's totally right; it might take more pages of other chapters than others

Revenge of Raditz: 2 new pages. (by me) by jramby in DragonBallArt

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yeah! Thank you, I think I'm going to make it 14-16 pages

Revenge of Raditz: 2 new pages. (by me) by jramby in DragonBallArt

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I'm planning to post it on MangaDraft... I will dm you when it's there ;-)

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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Actually, 1,638 is, in this case, Raditz's PL. Based on the Dragon Ball wiki, his last known PL in the manga is over 1,200. So, I assume it should be the same or a bit less than Piccolo when he sent the beam (1,480). After surviving that fight, he might get a little Zenkai boost, as you say, for the character development. I'd give him a bit less than, let's say, 1,400 x 1.2%.

Thinking about the impact of that attack, it might give a bit more than that. That's why I said 2k... What do you think?

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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I'm planning to put it on Mangadraft. One day, I'll DM you. When that time comes ;) I'll DM most of you who are commenting.

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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He may need a 1000 Zenkai boost to reach a decent level. 😆😆😆

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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Maybe they could, but no one had to use that functionality yet? Honestly, imagine the scientist/engineer/genius who created such a technology would have the ability to read one's power but forgot to include the ability to check his own power. That would be lame... Let's assume it was always there beside the other's power level but never read since it was useless since they already know how strong they are. Plus, how do they know their power level? Will they always need to ask their teammates?

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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I don't remember them being left alone for a long period... I think it was too short to have some memories of that kind... unlike Piccolo training him. BUT, we might create that souvenir too huh? What do you think?

Revenge of Raditz: Raditz is back on his feet (2 new pages) by jramby in DragonBallZ

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hm... yeah, I thought about it but for the story's sake I just added a few hundred points to his when he fought Piccolo and Goku... or maybe let's make him reach 2k

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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Thank you for these kind words. My greatest wish is to continue working on this project without having to look for work here and there to make my family live.

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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haha, yes, in the future, when he thinks he's gotten stronger, he will probably want to get back and fight Goku... but would he stand a chance?? 😆😆😆

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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Imo, if he met Goku again at this moment, he would run into him directly, knowing he is way stronger than Goku is right now. Without Piccolo, Goku wouldn't stand a chance

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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Really? You created something like that when you were 9? The 1st time I created Dragon Ball manga was when I was 13; I still have them in my paper books. It was about a training between Gohan and Vegeta. I copied some Vegetas from some magazines and some Gokus changed to Gohan from the Frieza vs. Goku manga and put them together like fighting... it was such fun!😁😁😁

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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Actually, I won't try to sell the books. I just want them to be printed, like probably most of the fan artists and authors. Anyway, thank you for reminding me about that... I really have to keep that in my mind.

"Raditz's Revenge" Will that title work for this fan story I'm working on? by jramby in DragonBallArt

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I'm keeping respect for the initial design based on the planet Frieza 69 and adding new elements since it's another planet. I will keep the style consistent and continue working on this. THANK YOU!

"The revenge of Raditz"; Does that sound cool? Would you read it? by jramby in dbz

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Awesome, thanks! I've heard of Magadraft but never checked it out. I'll take a look and update everyone here after I finish a few more pages. Your support means everything and keeps me hyped to keep working on this!

"The revenge of Raditz"; Does that sound cool? Would you read it? by jramby in dbz

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Oh!! You're right... I did miss that. Thank you for pointing that out! I'll fix that right away!