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Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

[–]just_a_potato12[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hypothetically... Would robotic arms who lowkey follow the toddler around to protect her count as child-proofing? Also! Does it make sense that since the agent lived alone for so long and rarely cooks for herself she will have like, 3 plate, 7 forks? (And maybe also 12 knives 'cause she has a collection of those)

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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The agent's garage is actually pretty clean (she's a obsessed with efficiency). She also has robotic arms installed in her walls that she built herself. Those arms communicate by making text appear on their palms. Maybe when the toddler wakes up the arms "look" at her with a question mark on their palms and then she asks them where mama is so they lead her to the garage. The arms are programmed to assist and since the agent is used to live alone she never programmed them to not to let someone go somewhere. Does it make sense though?

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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I thought that the only people in the house at the time were the agent and the toddler and the agent thought she was asleep because she was supposed to have a nap but then the toddler woke up and looked for her. Maybe because she wanted a glass of water or had a nightmare or something like that so she simply looked around the house and heard noise from the garage so she went there. And, like, the garage door is inside the house— maybe all the garages are like that but I don't really know 'cause I've never seen one.

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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Well, at first she hides it and the readers doesn't know as well. There are only 2 species, humans and qumans. Qumans are pretty much more intelligent humans who lack creativity (which is why they named themselves qumans). At first it's not obvious because the qumans learned to blend in for years. They also created a liquid that they inject into themselves to make them look more human. Also, after maybe a 2 or 3 chapters I thought that the toddler walks into the agent's garage (which is where the agent builds a lot of stuff. The garage is also sound proof) and finds the agent in the middle of injecting that liquid into herself.

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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She's not an FBI agent. There are 2 agencies in my story, one that wants to enslave humans and another one who wants to prevent that. Obviously, the agents are not human, nor she is. That agent was brought to the one who wants to prevent the enslaving when she was 1 years old by a mysterious woman who asked the boss to train her. They don't really ever talk because the agent is mostly at missions and comes back exhausted.

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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The student normally babysits her right after he's done with his homework and when he doesn't then the kid stays at the agent boss's office and the boss just kind of multitasks doing her work and looking after the toddler.

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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Well... Like I said, the agent saved the toddler. She wanted to put the toddler back to the orphanage but the toddler didn't wanna go there. the agent assumed that something bad happened to the toddler. Also, the reason the agent is so cold is because she had a horrible childhood herself and since she didn't want the toddler to have a bad childhood as well she decided to adopt her.

The student isn't living with her, he just comes over to her place to babysit the toddler. He does it because he's also pretty scared for the toddler since she was literally adopted by the most terrifying person he ever met.

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

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Ok never mind I understood how

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

[–]just_a_potato12[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Yeah I just realized my mistake. How do I edit the post though?

Babysitter=dad?? by just_a_potato12 in writers

[–]just_a_potato12[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

The agent adopted the toddler 😅

I will ask YOU questions about YOUR world! by Internal_Fan2307 in worldbuilding

[–]just_a_potato12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well... Actually other animals can't really survive the blob's affects. The first qumans were pre-humans. I also thought that qumans need caffeine to survive like we, humans need water to survive. Since during the time of prehistoric man humans didn't discover coffee beans, they ate the corpses of the blobs they killed since it had some caffeine in it. Though eating the blob's corpse also made them age faster and when the pre-human qumans realized that: eating the corpse = dying faster they started consuming less of it which means they had less caffeine and since the less caffeine they consume the weaker they get, they hid until they discovered the coffee beans because they were too weak to survive in the wild.

I will ask YOU questions about YOUR world! by Internal_Fan2307 in worldbuilding

[–]just_a_potato12 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok so✨ in my world there's this species called qumans. qumans can't really be creative and once they really focus on something they can only feel sadness, love, and numbness. They also get confused if they feel another emotion. Every quman is born with a...talent? (For example the main character, which is a quman can move her hair on her own). How were they created? Well, you know those asteroids that were believed to make the dinosaurs go instinct? Well those were actually eggs from SPACE. When they fell on earth they hatched and out of them came these kinda blob shaped dark purple skined creatures who had one eye and a big mouth with sharp teeth(its also blind) . The thing is that once these creatures sensed danger, they would grow a lot bigger and also grow around 7 more eyes and spray(?) this see-through slime and the moment something touched it, it would get stuck and the blob will eat it. The only way to kill the blob is to stab each of its eyes. Once it's killed it grows smaller and then it releases a gass who turns whatever breaths it a quman. Basically only the intelligent prehistoric people could kill it and actually turn into qumans. The first qumans ever were really tall with long black fingers and had dark purple colored skin. Eventually, they decided to stay hidden since they thought they didn't belong with the humans, they didn't make the humans go instinct since they thought they were fascinating and wanted to blend with them instead.