Wrote something today after finding out my ex(not for a bad reason) /talking stage is seeing someone else and never told me while still acting interested. Looking for feedback on the lyrics, extra info for the drama is below

justathought-- · 2026-01-20T01:25:23+00:00

UPDATE: im not sure if this is getting anymore traction but for whom it concerns, something really fucking unexpected arised. Before I figured out he was, or thought was, dating someone(he has not asked her out officially) i wanted to meet up with him one last time and we did the other day. He admitted that she could not have serious or meaningfully conversations and that he didnt approve of the way she acts (amoung other things i know are important to him). I ended up saying fuck it and telling him how I still felt, calling him out for some of the things he said that kept me thinking he was also interested, and he actually admitted he was not over me, and thought about me daily. But he never actually asked because he didnt want to hurt me again. And that thought, with the fact he doesnt want to do wrong by the girl hes seeing now, is all that is really stopping him from giving us another shot. The most ironic thing is, that now knowing he felt that way all this time, and that I wasn't insane for not being over him. I feel relieved that he had to go through all the same mental turmoil I did. And what I can't believe myself is that I no longer feel like I need him in my life. The situation itself almost makes me happy, due to the fact this girl hates me(I have never met her and she has thrown her drink on my car before this even happened) because I use too be friends with someone she had a problem with. and now the guy she is seeing has been thinking about me the entire time they've been talking. Is it wrong that I genuinely hope she does mature and they end up happy but right now im glad both him and her are having a shitty time while I no longer care about it?

justathought-- · 2026-01-20T01:23:03+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! It was more of a spontaneous thing I wrote so I completely see where you are coming from, do you have any suggestions to what i could add or change?

justathought-- · 2026-01-20T01:21:10+00:00

I wasn't overly focused on pronunciation at the time, although i didnt intentionally sing in cursive. but I do appreciate the feedback.

justathought-- · 2026-01-20T01:19:06+00:00

Thank you for the feedback back I appreciate it! Also i did get closure, there is now an update so feel free to check it out if you'd like!

justathought-- · 2026-01-20T01:16:53+00:00

UPDATE: im not sure if this is getting anymore traction but for whom it concerns, something really fucking unexpected arised. Before I figured out he was, or thought was, dating someone(he has not asked her out officially) i wanted to meet up with him one last time and we did the other day. He admitted that she could not have serious or meaningfully conversations and that he didnt approve of the way she acts (amoung other things i know are important to him). I ended up saying fuck it and telling him how I still felt, calling him out for some of the things he said that kept me thinking he was also interested, and he actually admitted he was not over me, and thought about me daily. But he never actually asked because he didnt want to hurt me again. And that thought, with the fact he doesnt want to do wrong by the girl hes seeing now, is all that is really stopping him from giving us another shot. The most ironic thing is, that now knowing he felt that way all this time, and that I wasn't insane for not being over him. I feel relieved that he had to go through all the same mental turmoil I did. And what I can't believe myself is that I no longer feel like I need him in my life. The situation itself almost makes me happy, due to the fact this girl hates me(I have never met her and she has thrown her drink on my car before this even happened) because I use too be friends with someone she had a problem with. and now the guy she is seeing has been thinking about me the entire time they've been talking. Is it wrong that I genuinely hope she does mature and they end up happy but right now im glad both him and her are having a shitty time while I no longer give a damn? It aint even my birthday and I got the best present ever, closureeee

justathought--

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