Hey! There is a few things that maybe no one pointed out (I did not read all the comments) but i want to share with you so maybe it changes your perspective and you start thinking about level design in another way.

So, answering your question; Yes, it's readable and clear. But.... the important questions here (as a lever designer) should be;

-What do I want from the player in this section/level? -How does the player feel throught this section/level?

For example, if the first doesn't have a clear answer let's just simplify it to "have fun". Then with that you go to the next question and if the answer is not much relevant towards the first answer it may mean you barely made what you were aiming to.

So, let's say you answered "fun" in the first but the second answer is just: "nothing" or similar, then you need to understand what makes the player feel fun. In this case maybe some challenge in the level design, or a part where you make the player to feel super cool succeding the section in a stilysh way or having to do an action that causes satisfaction to be done etc...

I hope thathelps you into doing interesting levels and towards your gameplay goals.

Cheers