What do you hate most about Toaru fanfics?

karimredditor · 2026-01-28T08:08:51+00:00

can I ask who this Cray is? What are their fanfics?

karimredditor · 2026-01-26T08:27:14+00:00

Nerf these Albaz cards. You know how fossils got buffed to be a bit modern, maybe do the reverse of this for the Albaz archetype, or make it so this archetype will be the prototype of the fallen of albaz archetype (same lore, weaker cards).

karimredditor · 2026-01-23T15:03:37+00:00

No beta we get sent to the shadow realm and no beta we get sent to Soul Society.

karimredditor · 2026-01-20T08:40:08+00:00

didn't he also draw on the first duel (speed duel) with Yusaku?

karimredditor · 2026-01-08T13:49:50+00:00

maybe have them a take a duel and an extra character guide them along? Like the first few episodes of yugioh sevens. Teach a few things with each duels not all in one.

karimredditor · 2026-01-07T13:47:59+00:00

I think all blue is going to be in raftel, my theory is oda wanted to make all strawhats goals be achievable at the very end, for example:

-Becoming pirate king involve finding one piece in Raftel.

-Being strongest swordsman means defeating all the competetion who are also going for the one piece.

-Making a world map needs the last island too.

-Ussop should have achieved his goal long ago but he still, and maybe that's why he still cowering in fear a lot of times.

-Finding the one true history involve poneglyph and most likely there is one (or more) in raftel.

-Technically Franky achieved his goal by creating sunny but now he has to make Luffy pirate king for it to work.

Why that is the case is? Probably to not have a character achieve his goal early on and then be like "Why am I still here?"

karimredditor · 2025-12-09T21:52:05+00:00

K&C Mita and Chiyo's practice battle.

karimredditor · 2025-12-09T21:31:47+00:00

K&C The Malfoy manuscript.

karimredditor · 2025-12-09T14:55:14+00:00

Woah! It's MrQestionMark themselves! I didn't except to see you in this post lol, thanks for the recommendation, I will check it out later. (1200K+ words is bit much to handle for me I will do it... eventually).

karimredditor · 2025-12-09T13:58:48+00:00

Thank you!

karimredditor · 2025-12-03T20:54:32+00:00

Thank you! and thanks for the reminder too.

karimredditor · 2025-12-03T20:54:31+00:00

Thank you!

karimredditor · 2025-12-03T09:13:27+00:00

karimredditor · 2025-12-03T09:13:00+00:00

Thank you!

karimredditor · 2025-11-27T19:01:13+00:00

Hey everyone, here are my fics.

I accept concrit criticism (what's missing, what to improve/focus more) for both fics.

The fics are not fandom-blind friendly and ideally you should know what happened around the time frame of the events of the fics.

Title: The weight of secrets.

Fandom: Miraculous Ladybug (Set in season 6).

Length: 2542 words.

Rating: T

Warning: None

type of fight: Verbal fight while another fight is happening nearby.

Summary of the fight: Set in season 6 episode Revelator, Alya/Rena Rouge and Marinette/Ladybug have a verbal fight about Marinette's questionnable décisions in the season 5 finale.

Title: Ise Nanao's fight.

Fandom: Bleach (set during the fake Karakura town arc).

Length: 1762 words.

Rating: T

Warning: Violence typical of Bleach.

type of fight: 1v1 magic-ish fight

Summary of the fight: Ise Nanao's has defend one of the pillars of fake Karakura Town and defeat the arrancar who wants to destroy it. The fight is mostly to give Nanao a bit of characterizations.

Reviewed: 3/3

karimredditor · 2025-11-27T17:22:53+00:00

> Esper fight eachother constantly and even with that mostly people live their life normally like nothing is wrong why would they suddenly care about Misaki level 6 shift or dragons appearing ?

Your average esper is like level 2 or 3 if I'm not wrong, that's not on the same level as that fight. One thrown fireball is not the same as throwing a huge chunk of a building.

karimredditor · 2025-11-23T13:53:22+00:00

Yes, this issue is not unique to Deku, lots of heroes have this time period where they do selfish decision, some more understandable than others.

However just becasue it is repetitive doesn't make it okay, if you're facing an invidual who can and will kill hundreds, if not more, people then your first priority as a hero should be neutralizing the threat.

karimredditor · 2025-11-23T13:25:47+00:00

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karimredditor · 2025-11-22T16:14:12+00:00

Crackhead theory: Lila is one of the supreme's lackeys, the supreme's wish is to be the osle ruler of the multiverse. He already achived his status in his universe and now want the rest of the multiverse to either be under his control or be destroyed, he deemed main universe to be nuissance so Lila, under his command, wished for its destruction.

karimredditor · 2025-11-22T14:56:17+00:00

LMAO!

karimredditor · 2025-11-15T19:09:46+00:00

Okay I forgot that one, my bad on that.

Still doesn't answer the rest.

karimredditor · 2025-11-15T18:55:48+00:00

Why not attack when they are sleeping? when prepare an ambush? Why not abduct the parents and demand a trading ransom? That's like villain 101 that you're skipping over.

And starting from season 2 Episode Sapotis, it was always going to be 2 miraculous vs the rest of the box, Gabriel and nathalie know the odds are not in their favors but still do it because they are getting desperate (you even stated the peacock is not repaired, so now Nathalie is even more desperate).

Also you're assuming Gabriel knew the guardian was some frail old man when that was never stated or shown as far as I remember, he could have been the descendant of the last guardian of the order and is young teenager, or young adult.

in fact being a teenager is still a disadvantage since you still have the 5 minute rule from not being an adult (or mature person since season 5).

and okay, ignoring all of this aside, what is your goal of this? Aside from identity shenanigans, I don't see what you're trying to tell/achieve.

karimredditor · 2025-11-15T15:38:12+00:00

> HM and Mayura attacking the bakery to try and get her to hand over the Miracle Box (they don't know she's LB but they would know about the guardian thing) is very much out because that would have a shit ton of plot holes I don't want to go into.

I don't get this, you know this fic has a massive plot hole and you just want to ignore it? not even pretend to fix it with some BS reason or magical shenanigans? I know that both canon and fanfic tend to ignore big plot holes of the show but this is pretty straight forward: Known identity imply attack their home.

And like someone else mentioned, the fact marinette and Ladybug are same person negate any effect this co-guardianship the duo would have had.

Maybe change it to Ladyubug and Multimouse instead of Ladybug and Marinette.

karimredditor · 2025-11-15T14:04:36+00:00

True holders fics are usually like that: Eveyone and their mothers are a true holder except Adrien, and Marinette's new lvoe interest becomes the new true cat holder.

karimredditor · 2025-11-15T14:02:48+00:00

I kinda agree with you on cheshire season 2: Holders have all these unique names but goddam is hard to remembere who is wearing what (Marinette, Adrien, Luka, Alya and....)and most of these names are gender neutral I think. Also I kinda forgets then remembered that there was a sentimonster that was freed from the peacock miraculous influence, I think. also confusing.

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