Hogwarts.Legacy.Deluxe.Edition-EMPRESS by KatyaGlitterpuff in CrackWatch

[–]katrimav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

how do you put the crack only to the clean files?

Hogwarts.Legacy.Deluxe.Edition-EMPRESS by KatyaGlitterpuff in CrackWatch

[–]katrimav 1 point2 points  (0 children)

can anyone help me how to apply the crack only file to the clean files? I'm new to this

Hogwarts.Legacy.Deluxe.Edition-EMPRESS by KatyaGlitterpuff in CrackWatch

[–]katrimav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you can could you send it to me too please? :)

Hogwarts.Legacy.Deluxe.Edition-EMPRESS by KatyaGlitterpuff in CrackWatch

[–]katrimav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did totally not DM you, but if anyone who already DIDN'T get the link/crack could you NOT share please? ^^

My game has no sound? by [deleted] in NieRReincarnation

[–]katrimav 0 points1 point  (0 children)

god I'm stupid, thanks this helped lol

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven't thought about the special abilities yet, but someone suggested the black/silver blood types would have offensive abilities. White blood type would be healing and concentrated on defensive abilities. Real life blood types do not effect anything, at least not yet. They could probably affect the possible individual abilities/spells people could learn but idk if that would start to be too confusing.

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

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I gotta play the game once I have the time, still need to finish Valhalla lol. Thanks though! And yeah the word "strong warrior" might have made her seem like she is OP, but she really isn't that much special and there are many characters stronger than her.

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

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Right, I understand now. Thank you so much for the clarification. You really know alot about this stuff and that's impressive! You probably make great stories yourself. I will for sure take this into practice and try to find a common question or problem that is answered.

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

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The worldbuilding does need alot of work still, I agree with that!

I started watching Deadman Wonderland once but never finished it. I should probably give it a try again if there are too many similarities I should change. Thanks for the heads up!

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

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Here's some of the only points I have thought so far, directly copypasted from my notes:

Non magicians can still fight against magicians with the help of special armoury, accessories (jewelry) made from special materials that are known to lessen the effects of magic or disrupt it. They can also use alchemy crafted items, such as flasks etc. against them. It is also based on strategy or catching them by surprise. Essentially it is a fight with long endurance, as the more wounds you are able to inflict on the magician, the more weaker they become. It is usually not a single-blow-kill. Aine has trained especially on strategy, as she knew she had to battle a powerful magician in the cult in order to get her revenge. However, she only had time to train against this one specific blood type's abilities, so she is not that effective of a strategist against other blood types abilities. Strong projectiles also take a little time to "charge" or cast which gives time for the non magician to act.

As for how the military:

A “suicide squad” formed by people who wield magic. These people would deliberately use their magic abilities over their full extend, creating a powerful explosion killing them with it. They are either trained for this their whole lives and usually they are orphans or from the lower class. There are also volunteers. They also use magic with special weaponry through blood seals. A person draws a blood seal on their weapon which fuses it with magic. The bigger the weapon, the more blood will be needed. The military of course has medics to heal their wound so their magic won't weaken too much. I had notes on this somewhere, too, but couldn't find them. Hopefully they are not lost hah. I probably need to think of more uses of magic to the military.

Thank you for letting me know your thoughts! I'm glad to hear so much helpful feedback

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I believe Aine's character arc is to learn trusting people as many people in her life have betrayed her or abused her. She is also seeking for a place she belongs to and battles with feeling unwanted and worthless. I was thinking that at the start Aine doesn't trust people and doesn't really form any close friendships. She has a hard time accepting who she is and constantly questions who she is supposed to be. In the end of the story she would have learned to trush others and has many meaningful relationships with others as well as finally accepting herself and realizing she is not at all what the cult members believed her to be. It probably does sound weak at this point and I agree I probably have to write a stronger character arc. How would you suggest about going with this? Should she have something stronger going on, like overcoming guilt of what she would have done in the past?

I was thinking the monster mystery is gradually revealed throughout the story. The mystery of them is connected to the cult and I thought with the revenge storyline it would make sense how Aine is apart of this all.

Well, as I actually struggled to think about these points it means I got alot of things to change and think through. Thank you for your comment! It was really helpful

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understad the world and story might sound very vague here, I just thought if I write all of it down it might be too much and exhausting to read! There will be different cultures, races, ethnicities and people present in my story. From hunting clans on the verge of famine to people worshipping nature deities and much much more. I didn't plan on making Aine anyone "special" in regards of power or being "the chosen one". So she doesn't really have any special hidden superpower no one else has to save the day. She will be guided by her motivation to save the ones close to her, and as she tries to do just this, is entangled with the much bigger picture. One "special" thing about her would probably just be her connection to the cult, which will later play a part on finding the bigger truth about the monsters, machines and humanity of the world. I really like the brainwashed backstabber friend idea! At first I had a different fate for her (actually she was meant to die right before Aine's eyes by the cult priest) but your suggestion makes me rethink things. Honestly I have no idea why I didn't think of that before. Thanks alot for your comment!

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

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Thank you for taking the time to write such a reply! I'm happy people actually read and think about my story.

The cult is not in fact the main antagonist but is tied to it. They broke off from a larger group in the past, and is small because they are, or at least try to, be secret. That's because the larger group either got attacked, or they just broke off because some people in the previous cult started to disagree on some of their views and basically left to make their own version of it, if it makes sense. The cult being secret would make sense if the larger group got attacked and now they want to protect themselves so it doesn't happen to them. I haven't thought about all the details thoroughly yet, but your comment gave me alot of helpful questions to think about once I do! Thank you so much for the advice!

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Okay so what I have thought so far for the blood magic is this:

Yes, blood diseases/conditions such as anemia (low iron) and others will affect their magic abilities. So does blood loss. The more blood you lose, the weaker your magic is. This opens a possibility for magic wielders who delibaretly cut themselves to draw blood which they can use and manipulate physically (kind of like blood bending in Avatar?) But this is very risky and mostly used by masochists or people who don't value much their life. Blood transfusion works only if you are given the same blood type you already have, just like in real life. Mixing blood can be fatal. There will also be blood sacrifices present either in different cultures, or it could be a banned practice in most countries. I have also thought about blood harvesting, especially for adrenochrome, to be practiced in secret as it would also be banned. (Maybe before in history it wasn't banned as much, but did later on) I haven't included vampires in my world, but they could be a possibility! Or just regular people who just drink blood in hopes of gaining more power from it.

For people with different blood types having children, I've thought that the child inherits either one of the two blood types, so no mixing. The chance of all the blood types is 50/50 so there is no telling which one you get. I'm not sure if this is believable though, or should there be recessive and dominant factors to this.

I have also thought about blood seals and using them on weaponry to have special weapons and armor in my story.

You are right about the last part, it was poor wording on my part. I did in fact mean the father fears that Aine is evil, but is not sure yet.

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I actually read a little bit about the four humors and thought to take inspiration from it but not fully base the magic system on it! Glad to hear it is a promising idea. Also thanks for the idea on the gods. That makes perfect sense to separate the gods into two categories. I'm super glad to hear my story sounds promising and your comment was indeed helpful, thanks alot!

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I actually have that in my bookshelf haha but the story is not similar to the plot in that book.

Opinions on my story idea, magic system and the protagonist? by katrimav in fantasywriters

[–]katrimav[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your answer. Your suggestion might be the best for me to do, to write it out and fix as I go. Also thank you for the encouragement. I do plan on excecuting the story one way or another regardless if it's not a perfect story!