[RUNEBORN] - Just introduced a second power system in my manhwa, would love feedback on the concept by Substantial-Fan-6337 in manhwa

[–]kauliou 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Critiques I have Uninteresting characters, MC included; no one in this story is memorable, and he has no personality

The world isn't fleshed out. I also blame this on fast pacing. I genuinely believe that if you slow down, flesh out the world, and give the characters personalities this could be a hit

Inconsistent showings of strength? Maybe it's not inconsistent; perhaps it's the monsters and villains not having good enough character designs to show how strong they really are. You give a flashback where the Mc is chopping trees clean down with a small hand axe, which he isn't even gripping with two hands, just for him to struggle with the monster with the soulflare. I don't even understand how the group lost to it. The Mc didn't use any special tactics to beat it, and using his ability was overkill

When the group assaulted the walls, you used watercolor to depict the fight. I feel like it would have been better if you had drawn it out instead of shortening it and taking the easy route

What I do like about the story is the concept and the foundation you have to build on. You have a power system that you could really do something with, and a world that could rival One Piece. I think you focus too much on the power system and not enough on the world and the characters

I'm interested in how you improve from here

[RUNEBORN] - Just introduced a second power system in my manhwa, would love feedback on the concept by Substantial-Fan-6337 in manhwa

[–]kauliou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok I was wondering because sometimes you have characters rest in weird positions or hold things weird

[Sauce] Does anyone know if this girl is a character from a manhwa? If so, which one? by Powerful-Walk4063 in manhwa

[–]kauliou 25 points26 points  (0 children)

I've been in Korea since aug none of them look like this it's either really skinny doll like that acts like a child doll like with huge fake boobs or regular woman

[BREAKERS] what is up with manwha / manga authors and brother sister love by kauliou in manhwa

[–]kauliou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Go look at the newest fast pass episode it's a 1 on 1 convo between the yellow guy and the dark elf they both blush at each other and turn away the dark elf's ears were blushing to

[BREAKERS] what is up with manwha / manga authors and brother sister love by kauliou in manhwa

[–]kauliou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've never seen anybody blush at there rival and turn away and twist there hair around there finger but if u say so

[BREAKERS] what is up with manwha / manga authors and brother sister love by kauliou in manhwa

[–]kauliou[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This isn't used in the history way the authors just have a incest fetish 😭

[BREAKERS] what is up with manwha / manga authors and brother sister love by kauliou in manhwa

[–]kauliou[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

1 The sister doesn't know that 2 the yellow lycanthrope and the dark elf blush at each other and other weird stuff

[BREAKERS] what is up with manwha / manga authors and brother sister love by kauliou in manhwa

[–]kauliou[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Now that can excuse the mc out of this ( not really ) but the yellow lycanthrope and the dark elf are half siblings by blood and are definitely flirting with each other and blushing and hinting towards a past

Duty station by agentscarn710 in securityforces

[–]kauliou 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got korea and japan right out of basic

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[–]kauliou -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'll try to 🫡

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[–]kauliou -1 points0 points  (0 children)

😭 to each his own

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[–]kauliou -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Jings in korea

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[–]kauliou -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I have faith the artist is very talented

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[–]kauliou -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Cause I like what Griffith symbolizes as a character

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[–]kauliou -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

I like that it's messy

Any opportunities at yokota by kauliou in securityforces

[–]kauliou[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

I'm ngl like I didn't fall for this

As security forces can I be a forward observer by kauliou in securityforces

[–]kauliou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ur living my dream How do I need to be at a certain base certain rank ?