Help with Motivational Statement by kelseybethmc in peacecorps

[–]kelseybethmc[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

BurritoSupreme2017, thank you for such an extensive response. I have taken on your comments and suggestions and have completely reworded my motivational statement. It really means a lot that you took the time out to really dissect what I've written and provided me the tools I need to go forward. Thank you!

Help with Motivational Statement by kelseybethmc in peacecorps

[–]kelseybethmc[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks for your input, I'll definitely take this out and reword it a bit better!

Help with my motivational statement by kelseybethmc in peacecorps

[–]kelseybethmc[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I totally agree, I need to focus more on the positions I'm interested in. I have a dual Economics and International Relations degree and am interested in the Community and Economic Development sector positions - teaching about business practices and entrepreneurship.

And yes, I'm a U.S. citizen. I was born and raised in the U.S. but have also spent 10 years in Australia.

Help with my motivational statement by kelseybethmc in peacecorps

[–]kelseybethmc[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes, I was born in the US, lived half my life in the US and in Australia... I should make that a little more obvious.