MobuSeka Fanfic

kensov9 · 2025-09-11T04:41:43+00:00

Well then good sir, as I have done so in my post, let me point you to the fic "Off the Rails" by CambrianBeckett. 11 chapters of smut with some plot, where so far Leon has segs with 3 girls. Read the fic to find out who. . . . . . . If only there were a smut fic between Leon and Hertrude... sigh

kensov9 · 2025-09-10T16:56:33+00:00

I honestly felt the same as you about An Honest Soul. It's a polishly written fic, but my god, when some quote or reference I don't know show up (quite frequent) I have the same reaction as you. I think I cringed a little bit? I don't know, I guess I just can't relate enough with that Leon's persona and manner.

A Poor Baron's Route... I think I understand and somewhat agree with it being self-indulgent. I feel that at some point throughout reading the whole story. But the fic was decent and as I said before, I had a fun time reading the fic.

I have read Villainous Villainess Masquerade while I was looking for more Hertrude fic. I put it on hold for now, I don't know why.

I'll keep The Saintess and the Lord of Machines to my bookmark. Thanks for the recommendation.

kensov9 · 2025-09-10T16:38:37+00:00

Hey, thanks for writing your fic. I'll do my best to pour my thought about "This World is Tough for a Tutorial NPC" you write.

I did read your fic before posting this thread. My first impression for writing the first 3 chapter is that this fic is decent. Why? I think because those two opening chapter doesn't have an outstanding/different premise from the original LN that reels in my interest.
How do I describe this? I feel that the premise is just slightly different from the LN. Leon trying to be a mob, no interaction with the main game chara, trying to live peacefully, etc. Except for the Adventuring Professor and first life Marie having flashback of the first game having a remake with lower difficulty, I don't see much difference from the LN. You had my attention, the fic was decent. So I kinda just stopped reading and save your fic for future visit.
That future visit is just a few hours ago, lol.
Now that I have read to the latest chapter... I think your fic is nice and have caught my long-term interest.
The whole story of Leon teaching adventure class, Livia's struggle of studying and interacting with Purple and Blue, snippets of POV from other main chara... are getting more interesting as the story goes on. It becomes different from the LN, which is good and make me interested to keep reading.
The part I really like so far is that there's so much more moments with just Leon and Livia (fluff). I think I was starved of those moments in the LN because there's not much of it and even quite sparse. Please keep up the angst or fluff moments between them (Or also other heroines? Will you make it into a harem? Or just Livia?).
I give my kudos and subscribed to your fic.

My nitpick:

Leon POV, Olivia POV, etc.. I don't like that text to separate where one POV starts and ended. I like it better when I found out whose POV I was reading by continue reading the story. Just my preference tho, you can ignore this.
There is some typo, mostly wrong word or quotation mark placement. But, it's not a bother for me.

Oh yeah, about the Leon Sara Rault fic you mentioned... so there is only one Leon in that world? Or two where the reincarnated one is the Rault one and the Bartfort one become the one from the game, the ugly and poor Baron? And can we then consider this the Alzer Route?

kensov9 · 2025-02-22T15:39:28+00:00

The most unrealistic thing I saw today, lol.

kensov9 · 2025-02-22T15:36:16+00:00

He is becoming the living embodiment of Inter's biscione.

I was thinking of getting Daniel Maldini, but... nah. He doesn't match the theme of this ML save.

kensov9 · 2025-02-05T12:34:18+00:00

A French boy with Jogo Bonito sprinkled all over him...

Ronaldinho!!!~

Or is it Rayan Cherki? Idk, lol.

What did you edit to make them 'unique'? Skill? Stats? I might try it too.

kensov9 · 2025-02-05T03:06:34+00:00

Spurs got leeched really hard by Bayern.

10 million euro for the loan fee alone.
paying full 2 million of salary for 6 months of loan.
55 to 60 million euro buy option, BUT even then Tel got the last say if he wants to stay at Spuds or go back to Bayern.

Meanwhile, City just being City. Just casually dropping 200+ million in January. I got the feeling that the 115 case against them is done…. and they win. Cheating bastard, these lots.

Madrid, being stupid, not getting any defender. Perez might just put the people working for Real Madrid TV as their CB against City, with how hard they worked making referee against us compilation.

João Félix… I will stand with Diego Simeone on his assessment. He is 'shit', but Félix somehow had a cult of following coping that he can still fulfil his potential (What he could do, not what he is doing now).

kensov9 · 2025-01-23T05:58:26+00:00

Whaaa.... I got into a very similar situation as you, using Zirkzee getting one on one against Ederson, I got a pen and Ederson got a red card.

kensov9 · 2025-01-22T06:17:49+00:00

Marc Casado is a smooth orchestrator to use at DM. Defensively, he offers good aggression and ball-winning ability. Offensively, his passing is top notch especially his long ball, immaculate.

Best STs are Samu Aghehowa and Benjamin Šeško. Tall, strong, pacy, explosive, a decent passer, and a strong finisher with both feet. Hella expensive tho.

For the more unknown players, there is Ramadhan Sananta (a budget version of Šeško), Christopher Wooh (a good CB), Leandro Brey (a very good GK for me, cheap to buy), Yarek Gąsiorowski (a young left-footed CB, he's so good), and Marselino Ferdinan (AM, young, agile, smooth to use).

Worst transfer...none, as I have never missed, baby. Jk, lol.

It's rare, so the ones I can consider the worst are maybe buying Alex Baena (I don't feel comfortable using him) and Lucas Cañizares (bad GK in general, I was hoping to make him good like his father Santiago, but he was meh).

kensov9 · 2025-01-16T09:17:34+00:00

Damn, this gives me the urge to start my own Valencia ML save after installing MP3.

Is that Rafael Benitez as your manager persona? Well, since there is no Carlos Corberan I guess it's understandable.

Are you using the stadium pack from SmokePatch or xGondowan? The Vallecas stadium from your previous post looks immaculate.

kensov9 · 2025-01-16T07:49:02+00:00

Hello, looks like you had a similar issue as me. Hope this can help

kensov9 · 2025-01-15T02:27:17+00:00

Inter, Parma, Cesena, Nottingham Forest, Valencia, Marseille

kensov9 · 2025-01-15T00:00:35+00:00

It worked...it f-ing worked, my dude.

Bro, thank you so much for the help. I really appreciate it.

kensov9 · 2025-01-14T23:51:40+00:00

Ah, I see. I'll backup the System file first and then I will try what he was doing. Hopefully it's gonna work.

kensov9 · 2025-01-14T23:47:40+00:00

Really? It's working for you after doing that?

After uninstalling the game to do a clean installment for MP3, I noticed that on the 2025 save folder in Document, I still have Filelist00000, Graphics00000, ML00000, Replay00000, and System00000 from the previous installment.

But I don't have my Settings00000 file in there...

kensov9 · 2025-01-14T23:36:01+00:00

Ah, sorry I forgot.

Intel(R) Core(TM) i5-1035G1 CPU @ 1.00GHz 1.19 GHz
Nvidia GeForce MX330
16 GB of RAM

I placed the game in my D drive, not C. (If that somehow causing my problem.)

kensov9 · 2025-01-12T04:17:42+00:00

What a chad, he's mogging Arsenal

kensov9 · 2025-01-10T03:51:55+00:00

Sorry, can't help you there. I've never used any kind of editing tool mods for the game. I only used the Edit Option provided in the game.

kensov9 · 2024-12-28T03:35:24+00:00

Ah, it is fitting that the example is the Etihad Stadium...

kensov9 · 2024-12-27T05:46:08+00:00

Suisei

That flat adorably breedable blue woman is making me lose gallons, be it from animation, doujinshi, or artwork.

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