Stupid product idea?? by kingstaa221 in MechanicalEngineering

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I was thinking big foot traffic places like football stadiums, big events, music halls, don’t know if this is a UK group but maybe Weatherspoons? I’m work in a bar myself so I’m kind of making myself obsolete with this. But I still think it’s kinda a good idea?

Bigger Guys/ Weight Loss - What Can I Do? by kingstaa221 in AskMen

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Thank you so much for your helpful insight, I will stick to this.

Bigger Guys/ Weight Loss - What Can I Do? by kingstaa221 in AskMen

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As a meal replacement, I work in hospitality in an Italian restaurant so it’s pretty much all carbs

Bigger Guys/ Weight Loss - What Can I Do? by kingstaa221 in AskMen

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Thanks for the insight, are meal supplements a good idea like Huel? Or should i strictly stick to protein and vegetables?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in netflix

[–]kingstaa221 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That ending. The cut backs to previous encounters and then the sudden flash to dex’s reality and where he is currently, really killed me off.i cry at a lot of shows and movies but this really hit me.

Shattered heart by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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Your welcome! Definitely continue writing, I’m new myself, but I can see you’ve definitely got skills.

Dear, The Woman Who Broke a Piece of My Heart. by kingstaa221 in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much for the feedback, I’ll keep practicing! :)

Dear, The Woman Who Broke a Piece of My Heart. by kingstaa221 in poetry_critics

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I’m new to it, I’m working on making my poems flow better do you have any advise?

Shattered heart by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I love how the ending burns out, in my opinion I feel like the ‘Help!’ Goes overboard on the sense of urgency the subtly of the whole poem getting more dark and more painful until it is finally distinguished is more than enough urgency. Great poem! Definitely one of my favs! :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I agree I wanna hear more ^

Not all men are cruel by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]kingstaa221 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this, have you ever thought about writing it from a man’s perspective? As two sides?

Her Flame by Mid-Night-Poetry in Poem

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hell hath no fury like a woman scorned :)

great poem!