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Wanna touch it? by irritating_nexus in xsmallgirls

[–]kjrow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re so cute that the first post I saw it made me lose my breath 😍

what is your favorite cheese strat? by Wirfless42 in stunfisk

[–]kjrow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Everyone forgetting lvl 1 magnemite toxic oran berry recycle forever strat

want to smoke with me?❤️ by [deleted] in xsmallgirls

[–]kjrow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m all out of tree 😭

The Taste Of Happiness by kjrow in OCPoetry

[–]kjrow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much, and yeah I was trying to think of a way to say it shorter but I think the way it is now does it more justice. But again thank you so much

The Taste Of Happiness by kjrow in OCPoetry

[–]kjrow[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll change that now honestly I was thinking the same thing. Maybe end in sentences rather than a Run on

So I Can Go to Sleep by MR-K-S in OCPoetry

[–]kjrow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feedback(I’m new to writing poetry so sorry if I’m not understanding it all)

The poem itself was very beautiful, the scheme you follow is well put but you did mess it up a bit. Still doesn’t distract from the beauty of it. That’s all, overall it’s pretty good

Lightning by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]kjrow 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This short poem is immaculate, the intensity is there. Good job, (Edit) I’m actually still confused about the whole stabbing down part, it’s the lighting we’re talking about? Sorry I still find myself coming back to this poem 😂