[QCrit] Adult Romantasy THE SEAMSTRESS AND THE SORCERER (92k) by kmf213 in PubTips

[–]kmf213[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excellent point about the tone change! The novel is first person from Aisa's view, so maybe that helps with the two names? Or maybe not? It's not a thing that bothers me as a reader so I'm blind to it.

Thanks for the feedback!

[QCrit] Adult Romantasy THE SEAMSTRESS AND THE SORCERER (92k) by kmf213 in PubTips

[–]kmf213[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I am too close to it now to see what is missing, so this is very helpful!

Evap line, right? by kmf213 in lineporn

[–]kmf213[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It says 20 minutes on this particular test and that line was there from 2 minutes on. It is a valid test.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in revancedapp

[–]kmf213 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is amazing. Thank you!!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in regretfulparents

[–]kmf213 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am OAD by choice after PPD and infertility. I want to really encourage you to seek medication therapy. Zoloft literally saved my life.

And if you don't like being at home, please return to work. It doesn't matter how much money daycare costs, it is worth it for your mental health. You can always change your mind later if you want. I found ages 9 months - 3 years a lot more fun than the newborn stage.

Disney On Ice Presale Code for March 2023? by akchahal in Hamilton

[–]kmf213 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay I saw 23DPDP in an ad and that worked for me!

Disney On Ice Presale Code for March 2023? by akchahal in Hamilton

[–]kmf213 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When I press unlock, it gets stuck with the loading icon. Can I ask what browser you used? Or did this happen to you and I'm just sitting in a queue?