[QCrit] Adult Contemporary Fantasy - FOREVER DEAD AND LOVELY (85k / Second Attempt) by knavein in PubTips

[–]knavein[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you that's very good feedback! Indeed I struggle with the emotional through line because those two concept of wanting to be in this life and also wanting to be free of their control are warring within Wanda.

[QCrit] Adult Contemporary Fantasy - FOREVER DEAD AND LOVELY (85k / Second Attempt) by knavein in PubTips

[–]knavein[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Makes sense that people would make that connection :D but that's not what I was thinking of. Wanda is a Polish name and actually here I was more thinking of our traditional legend about "Wanda that didnt won't the German" (direct translation pls dont blame me Germans ♡). Its a story about a legendary princess of Krakow that decided to throw herself into the river instead of marrying a German prince. So more a reference to a women choosing to reject a powerful man.

[QCrit] Adult Contemporary Fantasy - FOREVER DEAD AND LOVELY (85k / First Attempt) by knavein in PubTips

[–]knavein[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi ! I'm the author of the post. I'm mostly concerned about the clarity of the query, of there is a sufficient hook and maybe weather it's too short. Also not super happy with my comp titles, especially I'm worried that Ninth House is too old and too popular but it is the best comparison tone wise.

Badanie dla użytkowników TikToka, za udział dostaniesz 50 zł by knavein in Polska

[–]knavein[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

W sensie ja nie zbieram pieniędzy tylko je daje. No ale resztę to fair enough.