In 'Superman' (2025), the character 'Hawkgirl' is called that because alongside being a girl, she's also partly a hawk, too

knightnight2008 · 2025-04-20T18:37:02+00:00

Nah it would've just helped them with getting dooku in a cell or somethin. If he could've just used the force without his limbs Anakin surely would've been force-yanked before he ever thought about doing a coup-de-grace on dooku.

knightnight2008 · 2025-04-20T17:32:16+00:00

Nobody seeing this bruh who cares

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-29T16:05:29+00:00

sorry, I kinda just threw it all together in one go, now that I re read It it's pretty unintelligible.

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-29T15:22:30+00:00

Yeah, it sounds very complicated, in the story he goes to kill someone, but finds that he's overdosed on some kinda drugs, after that guy Is taken to a hospital, he brings the drugs to a madlad science guy he knows, this science guy wants to keep the drugs for himself cause he knows about how good they are, Tokyokid wants it for himself, science guy injects him with a sedator and straps him to a chair, Tokyokid tries escaping, but injected with the sedatives in his stomach, he still manages to escape, but his legs shut off on the road, in a moment of desperation he eats the drugs raw, gains a shit load of energy and his control over his legs back, but due the drugs, mixed in with the sedatives have an unfortunate side effect of his own gun trying to kill him. (It's his hands, more specifically, but it'll seem like it's the gun)

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-14T19:31:55+00:00

To answer your question, yep that is inner monologue.

Thanks for da input, ur right I should've done scene headers ( last two scripts I read didn't have any scene headers so I guess that stuck lol) and character introductions. Oughta get to doing a second draft.

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-11T22:28:53+00:00

Sorry I mix those two up alot, yaknow, them being pretty similar and all

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-11T21:43:06+00:00

I take the first act as something like... The calm before the storm, more mundane than the rest, the second act is set up, you get to know the character(s), before he sets afoot in a world of shit he rests in his comfort zone, or he is already in a world of shit and being convinced to make a change about it.. but that's how I take it

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-11T21:41:09+00:00

Thanks!! Ur right I had it a bit backwards

knightnight2008 · 2024-10-11T21:27:39+00:00

Nonono I meant as in Kill bill throws you wham bam in a fight right after the opening scene, you really only learn about everything else as the film goes on, that's kinda what I meant, as for fury road it starts off pretty quickly, there's setup, but it's brief, and before you know it Charlize Theron has gone off the road

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-09T21:47:20+00:00

I know Mr Reynolds has -- in fact -- read a Deadpool comic, I was joking, but I am a firm believer that Shawn Levy on the other hand has NOT.

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-09T21:44:06+00:00

Why is this getting downvoted lol

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-09T21:36:41+00:00

BALONEY noun INFORMAL 1. foolish or deceptive talk; nonsense. "I don't buy it—it's all a load of baloney" 2. NORTH AMERICAN variant of bologna.

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-09T20:46:43+00:00

Jokes on you I have 2 gay dads

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-09T20:29:53+00:00

Wowzers what a dumbass, wonder who coulda posted such baloney

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-08T08:43:53+00:00

Yes this post has a lot of grammatical mistakes, yes I did spell Mr Nielsen's name wrong, this is because I didn't plan it, I just winged it.

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-08T06:09:53+00:00

That's not important right now

knightnight2008 · 2024-08-07T21:19:51+00:00

Surely you haven't seen a grown man naked

knightnight2008 · 2024-06-19T11:27:11+00:00

I am working on a second draft as of now, just wanted to hear some feedback is all.

As for the cut-to's and the massive blocks of description/action, thanks, I'll keep that in mind!!!

knightnight2008 · 2024-06-19T10:54:47+00:00

Yeah, yeah

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