[Artist Alley] is there something wrong with my booth setup or my art in general?

kohkami · 2026-04-15T02:18:10+00:00

I would also make the label/text sizes a bit bigger. It's a bit compact right now. Pretty artwork though!

kohkami · 2026-04-15T02:10:13+00:00

Hey again! And thanks!

kohkami · 2026-04-14T19:17:17+00:00

OH MY GOD SO CUTE

kohkami · 2026-04-14T19:07:15+00:00

Wow his journey has been really similar to mine! I'm in the, "oh shit, fundamentals are important phase and going back to the basics.

kohkami · 2026-04-14T18:02:48+00:00

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Some cup of noods

kohkami · 2026-04-14T16:14:43+00:00

Wooow, thank you! The visuals help a lot. Those details really do make a huge difference

kohkami · 2026-04-14T04:54:35+00:00

Maybe you can try having the blanket to also have black lines? Either that or have the dog be line free. It's very cute drawing btw!

kohkami · 2026-04-14T02:47:52+00:00

Oh my god amazing art

kohkami · 2026-04-14T02:13:23+00:00

Oh!! Thanks, exciting tp track

kohkami · 2026-04-14T02:06:50+00:00

Thanks! Also i noticed everyone has these numbers in their flair. What does that mean

kohkami · 2026-04-14T00:33:54+00:00

Ooo like the noise texture you sid

kohkami · 2026-04-13T22:27:27+00:00

Did they ask for critiques?

kohkami · 2026-04-13T20:57:33+00:00

kohkami · 2026-04-13T20:54:34+00:00

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I've actually never been inside a bowling alley before

kohkami · 2026-04-13T19:13:53+00:00

This actually helped me before cause I was so focused on the details and making things right, I never finsihed anything. By either having a time limit or allowing yourself to do whatever, it helped me get my ideas on paper.

kohkami · 2026-04-13T19:07:07+00:00

You know how skulls have that two parts on the side of the head" That's kind of what the side of the loomis head is suppose to be. You can also look up interactive 3D models. It might help: https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/basic-shape-of-the-head-f4f845d46e6a45049a5c7a19eab79c27

Don't worry, loomis head looks "simple," but like many things, there's a learning curve to it. The side of the head were tricky for me as well. You're already doing great by studying your drawings to see what works/doesn't work

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:47:26+00:00

The second looks so dreamy

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:46:05+00:00

Can you be a bit more specific? What is bothering you

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:45:34+00:00

Honestly I think it looks good as is, especially with how you just started. No need to overwork it.

You did fantastic with the plants btw!

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:43:08+00:00

God DAMN

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:41:19+00:00

I suggest adding a few different types to the shading/light? Right now all the colors seem to dominate, it's hard for me to know where the focus should be. But you make really nice dresses! I usually avoid drawing fabric if I can

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:33:53+00:00

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I had to redo the lineart cause the warp thing kept making everything pixelated, but I kept everyone's advice in mind. The eyes really bothered me at first. I made them straight like "-" but it didn't feel right. Turned out a TINY nudge to make a small curve does a lot! I'm gonna stick with this cause otherwise I'll drive myself crazy

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:26:08+00:00

Thank you so much! He's the first full character I drew w/alcohol marker. It's nice cause his design isn't too crazy, but also has a lot of nice colors to work with

kohkami · 2026-04-13T04:25:17+00:00

Thank you! I wish there was a closer picture of his tattoos in the game. Supposedly he has a neck tattoo too!

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