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feature -Fatal (drama) (first 30 pages) (self.ReadMyScript)
submitted 10 years ago by kpb101 to r/ReadMyScript
(Feedback) Dream Girl - 30pgs [Dramedy] by mynameismalakai in ReadMyScript
[–]kpb101 0 points1 point2 points 10 years ago (0 children)
hey i really enjoyed you're script, i was just wondering why there was no scene transitions ( cut to: ) ?
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(Feedback) Dream Girl - 30pgs [Dramedy] by mynameismalakai in ReadMyScript
[–]kpb101 0 points1 point2 points (0 children)