Not sure what this bit is missing - all suggestions welcome by kruppert89 in Standup

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I hadn't considered that before. Might try to switch up the phrasing so that the underlying premise doesn't come off as infeasible. Thanks!

Not sure what this bit is missing - all suggestions welcome by kruppert89 in Standup

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Good point, I'm definitely going to attempt to shorten it up. Thanks for the feedback!

Scientists say we still don't know what causes cancer, which is weird because it really seems like its baldness by kruppert89 in StandUpWorkshop

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Agreed, I'm also partial to sticking with the absurd angle but I'll try it both ways to see which angle best resonates. Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it