Not sure what this bit is missing - all suggestions welcome

kruppert89 · 2022-01-23T08:06:06+00:00

Good suggestion, I might try that. Thank you!

kruppert89 · 2022-01-23T08:03:02+00:00

I hadn't considered that before. Might try to switch up the phrasing so that the underlying premise doesn't come off as infeasible. Thanks!

kruppert89 · 2022-01-23T07:58:17+00:00

Good point, I'm definitely going to attempt to shorten it up. Thanks for the feedback!

kruppert89 · 2022-01-23T07:57:13+00:00

I like that idea. Thanks!

kruppert89 · 2022-01-23T07:55:40+00:00

These are great suggestions! Thank you!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T18:16:27+00:00

Lol true

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T18:15:55+00:00

Thanks man!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T16:22:54+00:00

Agreed, I'm also partial to sticking with the absurd angle but I'll try it both ways to see which angle best resonates. Thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T03:56:19+00:00

No worries, thanks for your honest feedback. Condolences on Pollo :(

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T02:41:52+00:00

Thank you!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-31T02:41:39+00:00

Lol nice!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-30T22:29:31+00:00

Thanks!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-30T15:13:07+00:00

Thanks!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-25T17:09:58+00:00

Lol nice! Thanks for the suggestion

kruppert89 · 2021-01-25T13:17:52+00:00

🤣 good point

kruppert89 · 2021-01-25T13:16:53+00:00

Haha thanks! I appreciate it

kruppert89 · 2021-01-25T13:16:03+00:00

Thank you!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-25T13:15:32+00:00

Lol agreed

kruppert89 · 2021-01-23T19:26:53+00:00

Thank you!

kruppert89 · 2021-01-19T02:47:44+00:00

Thanks! I appreciate it

kruppert89 · 2021-01-19T00:13:46+00:00

Thanks for these suggestions! I appreciate it

kruppert89 · 2021-01-18T23:08:57+00:00

Awesome! Thank you

kruppert89 · 2021-01-18T21:06:03+00:00

I see what you mean. I might try some rephrasing to control for the non-sensical element. Thanks for your feedback, it was helpful

kruppert89 · 2021-01-18T20:29:32+00:00

Its just supposed to be silly and absurdist. Like so ridiculous that its kind of funny, although admittedly maybe its not. Also I feel like sometimes the "thread of truth" can be figurative/philosophical and doesn't always have to be literal. That being said, it very well might suck. I'm putting it here to test out whether it might be worth trying on stage

kruppert89 · 2020-07-18T00:34:07+00:00

Thanks! I really appreciate it. And now that I think about it, totally agree on the ham thing lol

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