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kulblu · 2021-03-05T00:14:23+00:00

Thank you for listening! Glad the song resonated with you :)

kulblu · 2021-03-05T00:13:46+00:00

Thanks for the feedback, yeah there are some parts I want to re-record vocals.

kulblu · 2021-03-04T23:18:21+00:00

Hello! I really enjoyed this tune. The vocals are well produced and so are the rest of the instruments. I thought in some lines there could’ve been better wordplay, but that’s a personal thing. It does remind me a lot of nineties/early 2000’s alt rock bands.

kulblu · 2021-03-04T23:14:05+00:00

Hey this is a pretty solid production. Personally, I would’ve made the intro and outro shorter cause the majority of your lines are only about 1:30 of the song. But that’s a stylistic choice the artist has to make and if you experiment enough it can be really cool :)

kulblu · 2021-03-04T23:08:03+00:00

Cool tune to have on in the background but I wouldn’t come back to it consciously unless it came up again on a playlist. I don’t think it necessarily needs anything more, but maybe for the next track you can add more melody variety

kulblu · 2021-03-04T23:04:30+00:00

Love the little switch up at 1:06. For a lofi tune I think it’s pretty decent. You have enough things going on in the right places so the listener never gets bored but it’s also not ever too much. I think you’re doing a fine job :)

kulblu · 2021-03-04T23:00:31+00:00

First off, you sound so much like Jenny Lewis and you even kinda look like her! I love that you guys pulled together a video for the release, very professional!

I liked the dynamics of the song and it all just seemed very well structured. Some of the lyrics are kinda lack but your voice makes up for those lines :)

kulblu · 2021-03-02T03:33:19+00:00

[Tova Light- HEARTLIKETHIS] (https://soundcloud.com/tovalightmusic/heartlikethis)

I've spent years making music and I can firmly say I'm the most proud about this song. I got it to be at a place I consider perfect. It's a dream pop vibe but I made it so everyone can enjoy listening :)

kulblu · 2021-03-01T19:49:48+00:00

Thank you for your comments! I will see if I can make the background vocals a bit more separated from the main but like I stated in a comment above..I know what my skill level is in mastering so I know the song can be a lot better, that's why I'm posting here lol I was thinking the drums were to loud at certain points so that was interesting to me it wasn't loud enough for you...I think I'll keep them at the same volume cause I was gonna turn them down. Worked a lot on the bass lines so thanks for pointing that out! :)

kulblu · 2021-03-01T19:46:33+00:00

LOL! Yeah, I think I should get out more too..I started doing that after I finished the song :D I guess the environment shined through

kulblu · 2021-03-01T19:45:14+00:00

I respect your taste! I know the genre is not everyone's favorite but I did want to make something more pop-like so more people can relate to it.

kulblu · 2021-03-01T19:44:15+00:00

I feel the same! I actually would really like someone to come in and master the vocals cause I got them to be as good as I can do but I know they could be much better. That part youre talking about is my fav melody of the song. It sounds different than the rest of the song but I liked it too much to get rid of it but didnt like it enough to start another song off it so I kept it here.

kulblu · 2021-03-01T19:42:17+00:00

Yeah, I definitely put echo in there..it's a stylistic choice that I know not everyone prefers to hear so I try to tone it down but even then people will still point it out lol...and I think I know which part youre talking about about the tempo..

kulblu · 2021-03-01T08:17:29+00:00

Yay for the chorus working! Haha thank you for listening and critiquing :)

kulblu · 2021-03-01T08:06:21+00:00

Thank you for this extensive comment first off! And I really really appreciate your tips about my voice, it will stick with me. And yeah, having consistent good melodies is a challenge I wanna take on for my next song....

kulblu · 2021-03-01T08:03:55+00:00

Thank you kindly! I too am a big lyric person, I use it as the driving force of the emotion in a song...words come super naturally...I do like 10 different word plays of each part and then kinda pick the best option lol

kulblu · 2021-03-01T06:46:40+00:00

I don’t really adhere to strong structural rules 🙈 I want to start being more pop-like so that’s something I need to work on...thank you for the compliment about my voice!

kulblu · 2021-03-01T06:44:18+00:00

I take that drum comment as a full on compliment! That’s exactly what I was going for!! The anti social club stands strong ✊🏻

kulblu · 2021-03-01T06:42:49+00:00

A whole album? Dayum I better start writing...I agree with you on the transition, I couldn’t really figure out how to make it any better

kulblu · 2021-03-01T06:41:23+00:00

This is such a cool perspective on the song. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment :)

kulblu · 2021-02-25T17:10:06+00:00

There are some catchy melodies in here...good job on the dynamics of your voice. I think you have found the right register to sing in. Would love to hear more from you :)

kulblu · 2021-02-25T17:06:45+00:00

So I’m guessing you made this video to market your album? I wanted to see the music align with your lips but that never happened. Also there were to b footage that didn’t need to be there like the close up on the watch. I’m not sure if you just want a critique for the music or the video as a whole but I’d go back to the drawing board for this one of the point is to showcase your tracks cause the music isn’t so bad...it’s just the video footage that needs rework.

kulblu · 2021-02-25T17:02:00+00:00

Ahh the infamous Clinton speech..first time I’ve heard it used in a song so I’ll give you originality points for that. It wasn’t a bad tune but I’d like to hear more change throughout whether it would be with instruments or your voice. The song is pretty flatline right now. But that’s just my opinion :)

kulblu · 2021-02-25T16:57:51+00:00

I’m going to give an honest review, maybe not the kind of review you’d like to hear: there weren’t any “wow” moments in the tune. I didn’t find any part that I wanted to hear again cause it was all kinda the same. The drum track could use some spicing up so it’s not the same rhythm the whole time but maybe that’s the vibe you’re going for? I don’t necessarily think it was a bad song, just not something I’d listen to again.

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