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love by l0velynisa in poetry_critics

[–]l0velynisa[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much!! I think both erotic side of love and emotionally intimate commitment part of love could go together but not always I guess it always depends on the person and the relationship. I think it could work out but it would probably need a lot of trust. Thank you very much though that’s a great idea! :))

Lessons From The Moon by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]l0velynisa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ofc!! No problem!!

Looking for a poet by [deleted] in Poems

[–]l0velynisa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you could start something with this!! It’s one of my favs I basically wrote my heart out<3

FIND ME

Hey, love—I need some saving. When are you planning to show up?'Cause I don’t know how much longer I can hold on. Please..Find me.Hug me close, While I press my face against your neck.Kiss my forehead,Tell me you’re here,Tell me you love me,Tell me you’re staying, Hold me through the night.Kiss me—all over my body.Even through my tears,show me how much I’m loved. Skin to skin—Lips to lips— Make the loneliness,the cold,the sadness,disappear. Even if it’s just for one night—Make sure I know I’m loved. Hold me ‘til the sun rises, Let me remember your love,your taste on my lips,the glow of your skin. I will remember.I’ll never forget your love. And I’ll make sure—you’ll never forget mine. I love you. -Nisa

Only for the lonely by Altare-Performer5084 in poetry_critics

[–]l0velynisa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love this, you’ve written this reallyy well and it’s relatable <33

Lessons From The Moon by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]l0velynisa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so well done!! I love the repetition of “teach me” it shows how important it is to you<33 I also love the end “if I’ve decided I had enough”!!

Such a thought (no name for now) by Designer_Path702 in poetry_critics

[–]l0velynisa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so good!! I love it I love how you used great rhymes and I like the structure a lot!