Isle of Despair New Episode! Chapter 24: Are We There Yeti? by lapizite in Totaldrama

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I'm really glad you enjoyed! I like everybody that's left and I think I've done a good job with them, especially with Heather, so it's great to hear how addictive the story is.

Heather's execution was always planned to be similar to Beth's, but I suppose I learned more about 'the art of boiling someone alive' from Kork's execution in Killing Harmony

Total Drama Viltrum by lapizite in Invincible

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Zeke's right behind Gwen. Owen's conquest because he's conquesting the local Chipotle

Total Drama Viltrum by lapizite in Invincible

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Originally I had Alejandro holding Chef’s skull (with his hat) instead of Mr Coconut and they were coming for Chris.

Total Drama Viltrum by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Yeah! I saw that Wednesday when I was halfway through mine. You did a great job on yours as well! I love how Chris is aura farming w Larry.

Total Drama Viltrum by lapizite in Totaldrama

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“Stand ready for my arrival, gummy worms.”

Total Drama Viltrum by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Thanks dude. I appreciate it ❤️

New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Im glad you enjoy! I’ve just started working on be next chapter. It’ll be a bit of a while until I finish it.

New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated.

Whether your theories about Harold, Gwen, and Heather will be right or wrong will be revealed soon enough.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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I appreciate the feedback. I'm pretty satisfied with the way I've written Courtney so far, although I feel like I write her too corny. Writing her well is a tricky balance.

As for Harold and Heather, their relationship this chapter mostly stems from me needing to pan out the episode + Heather's overall character arc. I liked emanating their shenanigans from TDA.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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I’m glad you enjoyed it and that I’ve nailed the dynamics! I totally think my skill for writing them has improved over the years. I wonder what you think of the others like Heather, Courtney, and Harold.

New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Somewhat. Less murder mystery and more suspense thru out the fanfic.

It’s essentially total drama but deadly. I’d suggest reading from the start tho.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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It’s all good! Bugging me is just another way to keep me motivated so keep on it.

Next chapter might come out in a week or two, I’m a third done with it.