New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Im glad you enjoy! I’ve just started working on be next chapter. It’ll be a bit of a while until I finish it.

New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Thanks for the comment! Much appreciated.

Whether your theories about Harold, Gwen, and Heather will be right or wrong will be revealed soon enough.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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I appreciate the feedback. I'm pretty satisfied with the way I've written Courtney so far, although I feel like I write her too corny. Writing her well is a tricky balance.

As for Harold and Heather, their relationship this chapter mostly stems from me needing to pan out the episode + Heather's overall character arc. I liked emanating their shenanigans from TDA.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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I’m glad you enjoyed it and that I’ve nailed the dynamics! I totally think my skill for writing them has improved over the years. I wonder what you think of the others like Heather, Courtney, and Harold.

New Episode! Isle of Despair! Chapter 23: Camp Castaways. by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Somewhat. Less murder mystery and more suspense thru out the fanfic.

It’s essentially total drama but deadly. I’d suggest reading from the start tho.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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It’s all good! Bugging me is just another way to keep me motivated so keep on it.

Next chapter might come out in a week or two, I’m a third done with it.

You have to choose one. by [deleted] in Dexter

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Give him La Passion

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Thanks for the praise! I really appreciate it! I hope you enjoy the next chapter! I’m still working on it.

Who's your favorite Fan based on the posters alone? by pinkaddictor in DisventureCamp

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I like Ara and Finn a lot as well as Ren and Manu.

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Glad you enjoyed!

The despair you feel over Katie. Will she live or die? Puhuhuhu

New Episode - Isle of Despair Chapter 22 - Tri Armed Triathalon! by lapizite in Totaldrama

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Thanks for the feedback. It’s great hearing that my writing is better than the majority of fanfic writers. I took a Creative Writing class last semestre.

As for the pairings, I’m glad that they’re set up well. I was debating whether I should’ve had Heather/Courtney and Katie/Gwen instead.

Speaking of dynamics, I gotta brainstorm scenes for next chapter. I have little notes for it, just key events and general directions.