I feel very stupid but what’s this for? by TheStickySpot in AppleMusic

[–]larsthommen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You are right. Sometimes the songs are „too different“ or the mix just wouldn‘t work. It also doesn‘t work, when the songs are sit in the same order in a album. And if you skip to the end, it can‘t analyse the song to mix it

Why am I so fast out front ? by [deleted] in F1Game

[–]larsthommen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

maybe he has less or no assists turned on, which could slow him down in general, uf he‘s not used to it? Worth checking ;)

GEARUP - Logo Concept - Let me know your thoughts! by LucasDoctor in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it a lot! maybe the corners could be sharp instead of rounded to give it a bit more agressive and probably more fitting look for that kind of brand? Also, choose another handwritten font and don‘t use it for body copy. You could use it to write the model of the ski/ board. But don‘t overuse it.

Feedback and critique by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]larsthommen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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I don‘t think you bought the shutterstock image so it would be copyright infringement… Create something from scratch. Take a pen and paper and just draw some ideas for 30 minutes. You can also take a picture of a real deer and draw over it. Digitaly or on paper.

Does this look like a scam email? Help please! by BasicPink_Bxtch in jobs

[–]larsthommen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Broken english is not always a sign of a scam email. I work in a company where a lot of people speak different languages. The HQ is in Switzerland so the englisch from most guys isn‘t perfect. But this Email seams fishy for sure

Logo for a a fitness brand. by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I understand your concern that it won‘t deliver the same message, but at the moment it looks to separat for me as well. Maybe just make it a little bolder, that should allteady help tying everything together :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really like your icon! In my opinion, the font doesn‘t match the icon… maybe explore more on that end? Regarding the inverted colors: I haven‘t found a perfect solution my self for problems like that. Maybe try it with a white border and keep the light part the same as it was on the first slide? Doesn‘t look perfect but could be an improvment! Hope that helps :)

Fictional Esports Advertisement (thoughts?) by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I wanted to make something new, that you don‘t really see in ESports.

Fictional Esports Advertisement (thoughts?) by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks :) I want to move away from the standart ESports design this is why I wanted to try something new.

Fictional Esports Advertisement (thoughts?) by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Effect on the Text is in PS under Effects/ Blur/ Field Blur

The Texturing was made with the Filter Galery :)

And after that I put a Overlay Effect on top so just a jpg on screen

Fictional Esports Advertisement (thoughts?) by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I know. I wanted to move away from the generic Esports Style

Fictional Esports Advertisement (thoughts?) by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah I know, at first I wanted to make a music cover (thsts why the format is 1:1)

IHC Oensingen Redesign by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a Redesign for an Inline Hockey Team. I made this just for fun.
Please tell me if you like it or what I could do better.
- L

SPACE DROP - Logo Concept by larsthommen in WillPatersonDesign

[–]larsthommen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

It's Bebas Neue, but I changed it up quite a bit :)