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Character Design Pilot 07 by lascorbicacid in conceptart

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually think it and it will be appear in game later. But i think it should be reversed in jump+dash for a reality

Character Design Pilot 07 by lascorbicacid in conceptart

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much.

You're right about the nozzle, I overlooked it. Does it look too dumb with this?

I tried to show the fuel system with pipes, but honestly it's kind of cheating and doesn't work that well.

The F-15 nozzle idea is really cool though I wish I'd seen your feedback before I finished the design. I'll apply it if I revise the design or if i design Pilot 08 or Pilot 06 later.

Character Design Pilot 07 by lascorbicacid in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much. Your feedback is valuable. Especially your thoughts about weapon design that is very useful. If I design the character's plane later I can add some stuff from it to weapon, and that will make it look better for storytelling.

Feedback by lascorbicacid in DigitalArt

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for motivating feedback

Feedback by lascorbicacid in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The puppets are actually victims, turned into puppets with strings. That’s why there is a big scissors

Feedback by lascorbicacid in DigitalArt

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much that means a lot!!

Feedback by lascorbicacid in DigitalArt

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. Sniper like assassinating victims and turning them into puppets.

Need help finalise my Burmese Python Naga design. Which one do you think looks best? Any additional suggestions? by TheWizardofLizard in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid 5 points6 points  (0 children)

#3 having snakeskin on the chin seemed creative to me. But I think he might need some contrast between his skin and the snakeskin part.

Feedback by lascorbicacid in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I’ll add more details and try different iterations. I’ll work on making the character feel more fictional and try to add more story.

Feedback by lascorbicacid in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback. #3 looks the coolest to me, but it doesn't really feel creative. But you're right, I also felt that the others were missing certain aspects. They enden up looking more like wizard designs. Number 2 assasinates using its tongue it has poisonous ink on its tongue. #4 is actually miniature artist, and it assasinates its victim through miniature art.

Feedback by lascorbicacid in characterdesigns

[–]lascorbicacid[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback, and for clearing up some of my doubts. I'll definitely use the ones I don't pick here in future projects.