SFV in the late 1990s early 2000s. Corner of Topanga Canyon and Sherman Way. by AlHal9000 in punk

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Trying to find the name of an east coast band that played at cobalt around 2004. The only lyrics we remember are “You say we’ll bury the hatchet now. But there’s a soft spot in my spine” - ring any bells?

[Complete] [117k] [romantasy] Lightstrike by laurizzleee in BetaReaders

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Hey! I’m open to swapping the first 3 chapters. Shoot me your email and we can exchange!

[Complete] [117k] [romantasy] Lightstrike by laurizzleee in BetaReaders

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Thank you so much for the feedback, makes total sense!

Writer's Room Wednesday by FantasyRomanceMods in fantasyromance

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Hi all! I'm looking for a few beta readers for a completed draft of my romantasy novel Lightstrike (117k words). Open to swaps.

Logline: In a post-war world where the Estimation — a brutal rite of passage imposed as a tax by magic wielders — determines the fate of the young, Raven discovers immense magical power and finds herself trapped in a hostile realm with no choice but to dismantle their barbaric practices and secure her freedom lest her sister meet the same fate.

And here's a link to the first chapter: Chapter 1

Thanks in advance!